6th Grade Dragon

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Here is a dragon I drew when I was in sixth grade. Please give feedback, even tips, if any!

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omg!! i am seriously shocked!!
for a sixth grader you were amazing :O
and i don't think i can give any tips because i think you are a much better artist now aren't you :)
ill be looking forward for more of your artwork and will check and see if you have posted more ;)

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Haha I'm actually really shocked too. I thought at first to be honest, "mann this is gonna suck he drew it in sixth grade aha oh boy." But, I'm surprised and glad I was wrong. This work is really good, you did good on the shading and detail and I'm very impressed post something that you've done recently. I wanna see (:!




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Hey shiney1, CaptianRandom here.
I love this drawing, you are very good. If i had to do a drawing of a dragon mine would be basic, yours is VERY detailed, I LOVE IT. I hope to view more of your work. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

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Wow. Haha. Sixth grade me is jealous of sixth grade you. I'll have to upload my dragon drawing from sixth grade some time just to show the difference. Anyway, well done.




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WOW!!!
I am seriously impressed and also shocked at the same time. Sixth grade!!! Seriously that is another big wow from me it looks great!!! Well done!!
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Hey! First of all, this is really good, sixth grade or otherwise. I can only imagine how you'd improved since then.

Though, I do have a couple of comments on it. I like the different patterns you use on its neck, but I think they could be better; right now they're a bit two toned, and I think some shading could really liven them up. Nothing big, of course, that would take away from the defining lines, but something that would make the transitions between even different... scales? (sorry, I'm not sure what to call those things) would smooth this out, make it more realistic.

And then there's the head. For most of this, you have a lot of detail work, a lot going on like you would expect for a dragon. But then the head's just kind of there, not shaded, not given nearly as much effort. The only part of the head that I really like are the eyes, which are well done; the rest looks unfinished.

So, overall, this is really amazing (especially because I have a thing for dragons, so I kinda love you for this). The proportions are right, the shapes are well done while still holding a unique design. Lovely drawing.

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Thanks for the kind review guys! I am done with this piece though, so i won't modify it, but take a look at my more recent ones if you like :)
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I really like it! The only thing I have on it is that on the back of the neck you keep going different ways with your lines. That 's pretty much it! *presses like button* Oh and the scales on theneck are going differnt ways as well, and it makes it look more like hair instead of scales. Then on the back of the neck, the line symmrtys a bit off. Otherwise it's reaally cute! If it was smaller I'd use it as our Avatar on I love Dragons! Good work and keep it up!
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