Stuff

Muchas gracias!
Sorry I couldn't respond right away b/c I was at a debate tournament.
Thanks for the reviews!

Smooth stuff,
Hairy stuff
Kinda-sorta scary stuff
Real stuff,
Fake stuff
A book on "How to Make- Stuff"
Good stuff,
Bad stuff
It'll-kinda-make-you-sad stuff(take out the kinda, it'll flow better)
White stuff,
Black stuff
Things that take you back-stuff.
Up stuff,
Down stuff
That's not s'pposed to be brown stuff(sounds weird, maybe "That's not really brown stuff? I don't know..."
Her stuff,
His stuff
I-don't-know-what-this-is stuff

Other than that, I just needed a light, funny piece to review for this stressful review day
Your sister in christ,
Abby

I loved this poem it was really fun to read and also it was very simple which made it way more enjoyable! The randomness of it was there but then I could also see how it wasn't random, it was all stuff you had in your pocket Great job! I wish there were more stanzas I enjoyed it so much!
Peace,
Snickerdooly

This is so funny. I guess it's supposed to be humourous right. It made me chuckle but alas there's not much advice for critical construction that I could give. It's good to go against the flow though, with the 'It's so sad about the sad books being popular' and this upbeat poem