Stuff

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I wanted to do something random. to lighten up the mood, you know? Because these days, sad and solemn books seem to be all the rave. It gets a little depressing after awhile.
So what better to write about than stuff?

Smooth stuff,
Hairy stuff
Kinda-sorta scary stuff

Real stuff,
Fake stuff
A book on "How to Make- Stuff"

Good stuff,
Bad stuff
It'll-kinda-make-you-sad stuff

White stuff,
Black stuff
Things that take you back-stuff.

Up stuff,
Down stuff
That's not s'pposed to be brown stuff

Her stuff,
His stuff
I-don't-know-what-this-is stuff

...and that's just what's in my pocket.

Very nice poem! It is catchy, and fun to read fast, so the sounds blend together. And very good tone. I think the ending is cute, and it stops you in your tracks. And you are right, it is uplifting, refreshing compared to the vampires and despair going around these months.

Smooth stuff,
Hairy stuff
Kinda-sorta scary stuff smiled

Real stuff,
Fake stuff
A book on "How to Make- Stuff" appreciated rhyme with a nod

Good stuff,
Bad stuff
It'll-kinda-make-you-sad stuff Related to

White stuff,
Black stuff
Things that take you back-stuff. Made my heart get all fuzzy

Up stuff
Down stuff
That's not s'pposed to be brown stuff first official giggle

...and that's just what's in my pocket. :wink: where I started thanking god for this

This made me smile, giggle, and thank god there are people like you in the world all at the same time!
I loved it. Love, in every sense, loved it. (redundant statement, is redundant)
Thanks for this lovely piece!

awww. the pleasure was all mine.
thanks for the review!

First of all, I want to start by saying that this poem made me smile. And not just little, barely there smile, but a full out, teeth-showing smile. I really needed that today. Thank you!
I can't find anything that was out of place, so I will just tell you what I liked. This poem had a really neat rhythm. It flowed well, with cleverly placed rhymes.

Smooth stuff,
Hairy stuff
Kinda-sorta scary stuff

I can definitely relate to this... I always find that there are so many random things in my pockets, and I have no idea how they got there, or what they even are.

Her stuff,
His stuff
I-don't-know-what-this-is stuff

XD Definitely.

Thanks again for the mood-lift!

thank you. That was very sweet.

Hi I really like your poem it's like a breeze of fresh air. To be honest when I started reading the first line I didn't really like it but as continued reading the poem it actually made me laugh with all that stuff going around ... haha stuff

muchas gracias!( thank you very much)

I really liked this poem I enjoyed reading it . I love how you rhymed the words since I cant exactly rhyme words correctly (:

This is great. I especially like it's randomness (I'm a huge random fan). My favorite rhyme is the first paragraph/stanza/thing (sorry, can't remeber what it's called, I don't do poems). I also think it's cool that all of the last lines have the dash inbetween to make it your-kinda-random-stuff (Hey, you could add that to your poem, lol). So, I really like it (I just noticed that I have parenthial words after every sentence. Wow, I'm to addicted to those things )

~BreakAway~

This is so cool, girl! =) It was light to read, fun to read. =) The rhythm was a bit longer at some lines, but twas all fine. =)) Good job here. =)) *likes on facebook *likes on YWS =D

Oh my! That poem is just too cute! I can relate to every single line of it. I actually prefer simple, funny poems like this as opposed to long, strongly worded, serious poems (although i do occasionally write some of those myself. ). Anyways, great job!

Yay! Someone else on a mission to brighten up the depressing poetry section on this site. This was quirky and fun, simple but sweet, and I really like it. Would you mind if I added it to my anthology ~*Life is Good*~? I'm kind of on a mission to find some happy poetry. The poem still stays to your credit, and it's even more likely to get a couple extra reviews. So just message me if you'd rather I didn't...
Anyway, this made me smile. Thanks for brightening up the day a little.
Keep writing,
StoryWeaver

Heheh, this poem made me giggle, as it did everyone else here as well. I agree with you, about all the depressing poetry and writing, that is. I mean, I'm all for dark stuff, especially morbid stuff (I'm probably the biggest splatterpunk fan you'll ever meet!), but even that just drags a man down after too long. Also, it's just started to become to cliche. It makes the real good stuff about the same subject less likely to be read.

Thank you for the nice comments.
Much appreciated!