Your* Poem's Title is Probably In This One

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I have writer's Block so I challenged myself to make a poem out of ONLY the titles in the first page. No words added. Every title is capitalized on it's first word. If you're title is in here and you would like it to not be, just comment and I'll remove it.
Enjoy!



Love lies, A falling sun Campfire,
A light in the distance When the clouds pour out
On my reflects of the hero.

Stranger,
Remember me?
The frozen heart and the wood?
The dream hunter and the hood?
Absence makes the heart grow fonder.

Society hates me. What a state of mind!
I have darkness in my veins
Little bitty moments Beat Bubbling light
The voice in my head, Stupid To save a life.
Heliokimesis, It's in my blood.



This world we so love, Our home.
How to live?
Last edited by KatTrain on Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:07 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Wow, it may not make complete sence, but, I like that you did this to try to get rid of writers block. It is a realyy good idea acculy.

I liked the poem, even thought it didn't make complete sence.

Good job! Hope your writers block goes away.

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Hey, awesome! Really creative, I never would have thought of doing that actually! XD




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Hi :)

This was a really interesting idea, Kat. I think it would make more sense/look better if every poem title was in italics, or a different type of font or colour to identify what was your own words, and that of someone else's. Or you could always link each poem title to the poem via hyperlink - that would be giving credit to the owner's of the work, and displaying how many different poem titles you have used.

Also, the "you are" you are looking for is "your", as in, "this is your poem". The "you are" you used means "this is you are poem". You might want to change that in the title and your author's note.

As for the poem itself - it didn't really make sense, but you did a really good job of trying to merge everything together, so well done :)
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You did a pretty good job of arranging these. If not particularly meaningful, it was pretty poetic. Sometimes it's fun to just play with words like that. I personally like doing little things like haiku and acrostics when I want to get in a writing mood. I'll have to try something similar next time I'm having writer's block :)




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This was chaotic, but I liked what you did with it! I think that I might like the first two stanzas best, though, if you asked me. ^.^; Just a head up; I'm stealing your idea for when I have no inspiration and hit the writer's block like a brick wall. XD
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<3...Just sayin

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Even though it didn't make total sense, it's definatly a good poem and a great idea.




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I love this (: It's a very weird idea, but I can kind of see a story coming out of it. Nice!




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Wow. I really like this! It's unique! And also kinda funny. It may not make sense just reading it straight out, but I think that it is in that that it finds it's strength. Also, what a great way to come up with a title! It's a very clever idea.
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Nice! Really creative. Not all understandable but awesome and clever all the same. :)
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I wrote love lies(: and Remember me! My name is Remember me!
Hehe! This is a really cool idea! Where did you come up with it? Do you mind if I do one? I dont want to be a copy cat but I love the idea of this !




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Hey,

Woo! Society hates me. Thank you deary. It is such a cute little idea which I may steal at some point XD

Well written as well actually so well done for that.

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Woah.... I really like this. It's so creative!
As pretty much everyone else said, it was a little all over the place, and didn't make a lot of sense, but I think if you were to take the inspiration these titles gave you, and created a poem with the same meanings you had behind the titles' order, it could be really powerful.
"It was Cinco de Mayo
Pillow case on his head
No more breathing time
An ambulance sped
It sped round every corner
Calling out his name."
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That was clever! I think it doesn't make anysense at all, but that's why it's so good. But hey, you have to stand back to see some art. Keep writing!

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