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I am here because I want to improve my English. So I await your corrections.




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These are really good! :D I like the second one best, where that sparrow is looking up (I wonder what it's looking at?). They all look like little chicks, actually.

Did people throw bread in the water before the birds came down in the first one? Because I was wondering why they would willingly go into a puddle.

Anyway, great job! I like how you captured the lives of the sparrows so well. :D

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Again, these are fantastic. I love the colors, and your use of DOF. Very nicely done. Also, I just love sparrows, so that helps. :)

Do you have a flickr account? It's a great way to share your photography. You have a wonderful eye, and a whole lot of talent. :)
Great job!

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Wow, you're a good photographer! The last one you could hae brought the second bird into focus. They are all very original, so good job. The first picture is probably my favorite. I think that the second could have had a slightly more frontwards angle, it would have been nice to see more of the bird.
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did you take these? they are amazing and its so awesome how you captured the sparrow looking up between the leaves. They are really pretty. Your an amazing photographer.




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Hiya!
These are very, very good. You are obviously a very talented photographer :D
First off, the lighting. I thought it was perfect. It gave the birds and their surroundings a very cheerful aura and did not strain the eye.
The angles were also very neatly chosen. I love the one with the sparrow sitting on the fence and looking straight upwards - very cute.
The focus, I thought, was - no, this is not going to be negative - ALSO very good. You have managed to retain the birds as the center of attention without making them look like they are sitting in front of a blurry haze with no distinguishable landmarks.
Overall, I'm just about blown away. I'm truly impressed at your photography.
Keep shooting,
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Thank you all <3
TIGERSPRITE, no, there was no bread in the puddle. I think, they just wanted to take a bath : D
Persephoneia, yes, I have, but I don't use it.
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How in the world did you get these??

The first one, love it, but the black bird on the right side kind of threw me off. Maybe you could edit it out. Besides that all the little problems are minor and un-editable. The one with the yellow leaves is my favorite. In the last one I wish the background isn't so blurry.

You are an awesome photographer.

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Calligraphy, I drew attention to it only after you told me so. Now I won't fix anything, but next time I'll take it into consideration. Thank you.
I am here because I want to improve my English. So I await your corrections.



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