Young Writers Society

I love you so deeply
I love you so much,
I love the sound of your voice
and the feel of your touch.
I love your warm smile,
your kind thoughtful way,
the joy that you bring
to my life everyday.
I love you today
as I have from the start,
I'll love you forever
with all of my heart.

This is a very sweet poem that would definately deserve its place in someones love letter, but it's a little cliche and I have heard pretty similer poems before. Maybe if you make it more unique by changing some of the wording and adding some metephors it would be even better.

Keep writing,

Crim

I like it the way its written and everything, but I feel like I have heard it before, its like some others I have read before.

But keep writing

I enjoy the feeling behind the words.
It's great(:

Crimsona wrote: This is a very sweet poem that would definately deserve its place in someones love letter, but it's a little cliche and I have heard pretty similer poems before. Maybe if you make it more unique by changing some of the wording and adding some metephors it would be even better.

Keep writing,

Crim

I agree with Crim. It's pretty similar poems before. I think you should make it more unique by adding some metephors and changing some of the wording.
Anyway, It's a very sweet poem.

Keep writing,

Alicia.

this is soooooooooo sweet, someones awfully lucky and whoever you wrote it for you must love them alot(: i loooove it

This is a cute poem. Made me say "aw". I liked it. Keep up the good work.

Sweet man....
its like you're so in love with someone....
Sweet...