Story Characters

I drew these up when I was making up characters for my story. If you read this, can you tell me what you think? Are they any good?







TIGERSPRITE

I love the perspective in the first one! *dies*

You also have a pretty good grasp on musculature. Nice job

Thank you!:D

Hello there.

This is pretty good. You seem to have to base of the muscular structure under control. You're on a good way! I don't have anything to say besides that...

Keep drawing!

-Other One

hi

The people are good as long as your story has superheroes in it! For the second picture, the one on the right's chest looks dented in and the one on the left blends in with the middle person. Fix those, and it will look great. It already does! The first one is good, but put more stomach muscles on, I feel like I'm looking at his back sometimes.

Hey, you have a fair bit of talent! Your style reminds me of the classic superhero comic-book style. it brought a smile to my face - converting to screen now:
One thing, though - I think you need to make your outlines bolder; the soft outlines were particularly noticebable in the second picture.
I can't really say anything else, apart from, yet again, that you have talent. Keep drawing, and God bless,
Ignis

I'm horrible at drawing. When I tried to draw my main character she had a long neck then a fat arm and a small arm.... These are pretty good. I don't think I could draw as good as this.
Great job!
~Ladypurple.

Tiger, WOW. You're really good. The shadings are good. I do have a prob with the proportions. I know, it's hard (a male body has a lotta muscles...eew XD) to memorize a guy's anatomy, harder to draw still. But a bit of practice will perfect that. You've got it! Just, wow... =D/ Great job. LOL couldn't say anything else. =))

~~Jash ♥

Those are great sketches!

In the second sketch though the guy's face on the left looks weird, kind of squeezed.

Are you planning on creating a cartoon/comic?