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Heya idraax :)

Would you mind reviewing a short story for me? I wrote it for a contest and I don't like it much, so I need some advice to help me improve it. It's not long at all really.

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Yes! Yes! Yes! A review request! I will do it this evening, because I have class in half an hour. :( Thank you for the request!
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Skins!! Your review is done! I hope it helped. Thai you for the request! Any one else have any?
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Hi I just have a little poem I wrote. I'm trying my hand out at poetry, tell me what you think!

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Ok, I will do your's tomorrow morning.
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Little Princess, your review is done! Anyone else have any requests?
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Give meeeee requeeeeests! I live off them! :D
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The Doctor Who Thing!

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Yay! I haven't watched all the seasons, so I won't be able to tell you if it fit's cannon or not. But I can let you know how the characterization. I will review this as soon as I get my Phil paper done.
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Hey there, would you mind giving a review on this?..it's kind of urgent, so it'd be great if you could review it soon, but no pressure, you could turn it down, of course.

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Shubhi, I will review yours first since you have a deadline. Ger, I will get to yours as soon as I'm done with Shubhi's. Sorry for the long wait...:(
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Shubhi! Your review is done. I hope I helped. Good luck with the contest.
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Geronimo, you gave me the wrong link. :( I still reviewed it anyway though. Who's next!
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give me requests please!
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