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Sins
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Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:22 pm
Sins says... · Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:22 pm
Heya idraax :)

Would you mind reviewing a short story for me? I wrote it for a contest and I don't like it much, so I need some advice to help me improve it. It's not long at all really.

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Please and thank you!
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Idraax
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Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:27 pm
Idraax says... · Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:27 pm
Yes! Yes! Yes! A review request! I will do it this evening, because I have class in half an hour. :( Thank you for the request!
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Idraax
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Wed Nov 10, 2010 11:08 pm
Idraax says... · Wed Nov 10, 2010 11:08 pm
Skins!! Your review is done! I hope it helped. Thai you for the request! Any one else have any?
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Thu Nov 11, 2010 2:34 am
LittlePrincess says... · Thu Nov 11, 2010 2:34 am
Hi I just have a little poem I wrote. I'm trying my hand out at poetry, tell me what you think!

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Idraax
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Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:11 am
Idraax says... · Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:11 am
Ok, I will do your's tomorrow morning.
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Idraax
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Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:43 pm
Idraax says... · Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:43 pm
Little Princess, your review is done! Anyone else have any requests?
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Idraax
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Fri Nov 12, 2010 2:39 pm
Idraax says... · Fri Nov 12, 2010 2:39 pm
Give meeeee requeeeeests! I live off them! :D
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Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:15 pm
Winchester says... · Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:15 pm
The Doctor Who Thing!

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Idraax
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Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:22 pm
Idraax says... · Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:22 pm
Yay! I haven't watched all the seasons, so I won't be able to tell you if it fit's cannon or not. But I can let you know how the characterization. I will review this as soon as I get my Phil paper done.
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Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:06 pm
MiaParamore says... · Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:06 pm
Hey there, would you mind giving a review on this?..it's kind of urgent, so it'd be great if you could review it soon, but no pressure, you could turn it down, of course.

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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
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Idraax
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Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:51 pm
Idraax says... · Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:51 pm
Shubhi, I will review yours first since you have a deadline. Ger, I will get to yours as soon as I'm done with Shubhi's. Sorry for the long wait...:(
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Idraax
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Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:33 pm
Idraax says... · Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:33 pm
Shubhi! Your review is done. I hope I helped. Good luck with the contest.
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Idraax
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Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:53 pm
Idraax says... · Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:53 pm
Geronimo, you gave me the wrong link. :( I still reviewed it anyway though. Who's next!
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Idraax
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Thu Nov 18, 2010 3:35 pm
Idraax says... · Thu Nov 18, 2010 3:35 pm
give me requests please!
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Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:21 am
ErBear says... · Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:21 am
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Thanks!! :D
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