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Forced myself to make this in Flash Mx.

HAPPY NEW YEAR!
(Chinese New Year, Jan 29th)

Hey a rarity! Its even COLORED!
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Sweet job, man. My only objection is that your drawing and shading looks rather sketchy. There are a lot of loose lines floating around, and some of your shading just looks like scribbles of random color. Her fingers look weird, too.




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Bobo, I think the sketchyness is his style. Yeah, the only thng I'm complaining about is that hand that's doing that peace sign thing. I would of made the fingers go to a point at the end like what you done with your other hand... but that's just me... x]




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It may be his style, but as far as I've seen it's not the style that any professional uses. I could be wrong, but the sketchiness makes it busier and harder on the eyes.




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Yeah, sketchiness is not the style that professionals use.
I agree whole heartedly with bobo.

Her fingers (peace sign) looks weird because the hand is a bit too small, and the 2 fingers go to a single point instead of 2.

The shading is just random scribbles, though placed at the right spots. Well I hope its the right spot.
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This was for a Super Villian Contest,

I made the lamest one.

I call him Oh Kanada, he'll beat the snot out of you with his hockey stick.

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LOL, you definitely have some interesting ideas floating around, Sponson. What's that on his left arm?




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A shield.
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and its the canadian symbol a marajuanna leaf.....


jk

interesting ideas, good drawings..
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Bobo wrote:It may be his style, but as far as I've seen it's not the style that any professional uses.


F*** professionals. I thought it was awesome.




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pretty cool but the only thing is the sketchiness, otherwise its right on! 8)




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Well I assume the sketchiness is there because it is a sketch.......
I like the guy with the hockey stick thats funny.
What contest did you enter anyway?
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One in another forum.
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