Life In the Eyes Of a Godless Man

It's great, it's simple but well written.

-MaskedGurl

I agree that the shortness of this poem does wonders. I really like it.

DanneilleLoveSong wrote: That was a really good poem. I normally don't care for really short poems but I really liked this. It short, sweet, and to the point. You did a great job Keep writing. You rock!

~Dannielle~

(Could you look at one of my poems please? Thank you.)

I totally agree with Dannielle. That was a really good poem! It's very sweet and straight to the point. You really did a great job.

Keep writing,

~Alicia~

I enjoyed it but it was very brief, which worked to some degree but it would be good if you but even just a little more. i appreciated your use of metaphor, how you did not just go out and say something really literal, but still made your point.
though it is pretty short i still saw that you had a lot of talent, good job!

Wow... this is deep...I love it.

i like how it has a joyful tone and then turns very sad but i can't really see how love can come from this i can see lust hidden in it thought, i really like the sweetness drifting through it and then the dowry bloom that makes it hit sadness but this is all good it keeps the reader interested even though it is very shirt but it doesn't really matter about size this is good so keep up with it because i would like to see more!

I really liked this poem. My favorite part was the last line. I like the way you phrased it.

I really liked it! I think it should be a bit longer though. I liked the part about the shriveling up. I hope this will help.

hey guys. thanks so much.