Tempting Fate

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Short. Simple. Bloody. Absolutely brilliant!!! I really loved this it's one of the best things I've read since joining. Keep up the good work :)




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I feel this is a bit abrupt. My favorite lines would be "the ferryman arrives, I have no fare"... but right after that, you seem to go directly to the end. A transition couplet would be nice. Overall, good rhythm, a unique breakup sort of poem that speaks directly to the reader. Not bad.
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i like that the title of dr jekyll and mr hyde makes a clear stance that the embodiment of one’s own evil doesn’t get a claim to the doctorate
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