Fluffy

Hi! Fifth poem is now on the loose!!

Alzora



Fluffy

I pick up the teddy bear.
Its fur is soft,
Fluffy,
Long.
I run my hands through it, loving the cool feel.

I whisper to the bear,
"Fluffy."

You real have a knack for poetry, don't you? The minimalism, word choice, and sort of story-telling here is really quite nice and I can already see a style developing in your poetry. Sorry if it seems like I'm stalking your posts but you happen to have all your poems on the top of the "Recent" list. :p

I like it. It's really cute about the teddy bear. Even it's short but I enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing poems. You can write poems if you follow your heart.

Keep writing,

Alicia.

This poem make me think of my puppy, because he is a maltese shitzu so he's covered with fur, we nick-named him fluffy puppy, I realy like this poem its cute goodjob