The Cat And The Mongoose-II

In Adini there lived a cat and a mongoose
They were both fascinated by shoes
One dark night
They were about to fight
But were trampled by a moose on the loose

Another great limerick. But what's with the 'butt'? Was it a , or was it a deliberate mistake ?

limericks! they should be applied in poetry far more often than they are, for they are beautiful compositions of strict rules and humorous...well...nonsense. i cannot also help but question the "butt" mistake. this only proves that us writers are far too critical over an extra "t" when it barely matters.

The word "shoes" doesn't really rhyme with "mongoose" or "loose." I would look in a rhyming dictionary (you can find them online now!) to find a better word.

And "butt" is your backside. But is the word you want.

I didn't know you wrote a second one! this was great... but it can't compare to the original... make this ... A TRILOGY!!!