My Garden

Hi again, again ! Alzora her- well, never mind. Lets just get on with the poem

Alzora



My Garden

I wander through this endless garden.
Giant, jolly, fuzzy bumble bees buzz by me.
Flowers flop happily as I push past them.
Sweet fragrance fills the air.

I smile, filling myself with the sweetness,
As it fills me it melts my worries away.
All I need to know is me,
And my garden.

You pulled off another charming poem once again! I applaud your polished presentation, fitting alliteration, and warm descriptions. Don't stop writing because I see a lot of potential in you as a writer and you owe it to yourself to develop that potential and see where it takes you. *follow* *like*