Miracle, (just make one)

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A little song I wrote :)

It always used to end with a happy ever after,
Now he all need someone to hold,
'cos were all falling down a pit,
Were there's never gunna be any laughter.

And now nobodys the same,
We've all fell into some kind of black hole
These new beginings we thought would work,
Are just empty old games.

All you have to do is try and remember,
The kisses, the jokes, the ever afters
There all burried deep in there,
Just make a miracle, a miracle 

So now just fight,
No matter what you have to do,
Save yourself, save everyone,
Or Theres gunna be a time when everthings gunna turn and bite.

All you have to do is try and remember,
The kisses, the jokes, the ever afters
There all All you have to do is try and remember,
There all burried deep in there,
Just make a miracle, a miracle x2 
"Winner, winner, chicken dinner" Wise words said by the one and only, Dean Winchester.




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Wow, I had no idea people could actually think up songs like that... YOU'RE AMAZING!! This is a cool song, I wish I could hear it sung...

Alzora
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What kind of music would this be? Rock? Pop? Country? I would like to know. It seems to fit a rock ballad or something that Imogen Heap would sing.

It's pretty awesome.
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Alzora wrote :Wow, I had no idea people could actually think up songs like that... YOU'RE AMAZING!! This is a cool song, I wish I could hear it sung...

Alzora


I agree with Alzora. It's a cool song and I wish I could hear it too. You might even end up as a international composer.

Keep on writing,

Alicia.
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I looked at the title and groaned a bit. It sounded a bit cheesy to me, but then when I read the lyrics I was literally blown away by your talent. I thought your song writing skills were impecable and I loved the feel of the song, it reminded me a bit of something that Florence and the Machine would sing. Very cool, I look forward to seeing more of your work!
Im the best :)



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