Anything But Ordinary Part 1

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Okay so yes I did this on my iPod, but when I'm at home it's the only thing I can use now for posting 'cos The comp and laptop are nacked! The layout should be right now and grammar and stuff...*crosses fingers*
This is a joint novel :) I'm Savannah and my
Bff Mollie is Alexi... Here we go!



Savannah Jackson

I sat in history, and relised that it was exactly a week ago when it happened, when the whole school blacked out, I had been sat in the exact same class as I had now history an mis had been going on about some random roman soilder when everyone just collapsed.

My best friend Alexi was just stood there with a what the-/terrified look on her face... Then there was a scream...

We relised who it was straight away, our other best friend Libbey then she arrived at our class room "Guys everyones asleep" she said.

Alexie or Lexie as we called her just turned to her and went "no shit"

"guys we should check the gym, that's what the boys had" I suggested, we headed to the gym were we saw the four biggest idiots we knew
Rio, Dominic, Connor and Tyler.

" Great, the nerds they'll know what's happening " Rio said.

Alexie

Great, just my luck, I thought, the only four people left awake in the school- maybe even the whole world were the biggest freaks  we knew.

There was Dominic, a complete douche. Tyler a total twat. Connor, that genuinly nice guy who could beat anyone up. then there was Rio the most arogant prick I knew.

Well with Rio there was probly a reason for the arogance, with that gorgeous black hair curling against the pale skin of his neck, with just a few brown freckles spread across his cheeks. 

Okay, so I had it bad but it wasn't like I had any chance since he wouldn't look below the a-listers for his next fling.

At least he talked to me though, and was alot more civil than he was with Libbey they were literly at each others throats, as they were again in the gym "Nerds!?" she exclaimed. 

"These two may be swots, but c'mon them set 1, me! set 3"

"Whatevs" he said, totaly not lisening.

"we have bigger concerns right now" I intervined before they could really get at it.
" I mean everyone is lying unconcious around us, yet you remain obivious" then I saw Savannah my best friend walk right upto him and hit him, just like that.

" ow" he complained, rubbing the spot were her planners binding had hit him.

We had no idea what to do until Connor had the great idea to scan the place. When we eventualy ended up at mine and Savv's class room and had saw every one had returned to normal...

"Savv and Lexi--What, I'm not even going to ask... The rest of you get back to class.

Weird.

Looks like it worked Yeee !
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Hey :D okay truthfully, i didn't actually get the story. Maybe if you can explain it a little more :)
Remember to check all the brackets before submitting your work :)
Okay that's about it. Sorry if i didn't do a good job at reviewing, i don't think im really good at it xD

Keep on writing!
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when the flood comes up, I will dance in the rain
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That was strange, it had a some little parts that were wrong. You might want to proof-read and then edit. Other than that though it was great!!

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Perfect!




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I'm sorry but I didn't understand what was going on, maybe you should proof read and change somethings. Maybe if you can explain it more :)
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