These Scars

really, really liked this. The flow was excellent and as i was reading the first few lines, i think i came across some rhyming too; but that might just be the way i read it. As some other reviewers have pointed out, you did use a few clichés throughout but it really doesn't matter because they just added to the piece.

I do think however that you could have talked about what love means to you and how you feel about it rather than using clichés, but it was a really good poem.

Overall: a great poem, that maybe could use some tweaking and your own thoughts added, but a good poem.

This is a really good poem