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Ok, so these are some things i did in my art class. The first one doesn't have excellent camera quality, but i've been told it's A* work, which is really good. xD I took the photo's late at night and that's one of the reasons they don't look fantastic. :)

Stick and Ink pot (sorry, don't know the correct term for it)
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William Morris Inspired wallpaper leaves style
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sorry for the lighting problems! Reviews would be really helpful. And i apologise if the last picture's size is too big, I keep resizing and some just don't turn out right on the website. :evil:

Thanks guys!
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Hi Mystical Blood! These are beautiful! I might consider re-resizing them, though, because I had to change the zoom level of my browser to 50% to view them properly. If you need help resizing them, check the sticky posts at the top of the Art & Photography section.

Okay, onto the review. Your sketching and shading skills are obviously superior! Maybe they could be even better, though! After all, that's what YWS is for, right? Maybe you could try using a kneaded eraser to better smudge all those lines together.

I hope this helps! And yes, it is A+ work. Keep drawing!

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Hi there. :)

Great drawings. I love the lines on there... Such aggressive lines for something to soft and beautiful. Love the contrast. ;) You should definitely find a way to re-size them to so we can see them all at once. It's really disappointing when you have to go left and then down to only see bits of it... Apart from that, I don't think you need any more critics , this is good.

Keep drawing!

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Beautiful pieces-- it's a bummer we can't see the detail. :/
Maybe take the pictures under some better lighting so the focus will work all the way? And resize them? They look like they're excellent. I really like the first one. The flower in the first one seems a bit rushed to me when compared with the others, but is still pretty good.

Nice job.

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thanks guys! I'll try resizing them! And none of it's rushed haha. it took me ages. xD
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You are GOOOOOOD. Well, I don't have much else to say... but I think they were nice!
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These are beautiful! i wish i could draw like that! keep up the amazing work!(:
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haha thanks! whoo. xD
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The title is what drew me in, the title is what made me stay. Hey there, my name is Emaly, and I'll be your reviewer for today!

Okay, first of WOW! I wish I had your art teacher, you know what we are drawing? We are drawing FEET. Yes, I said feet. Since I can't draw toes, mine are wearing socks. The socks have little bows on them! But that's off topic...

Calligraphy pen, and ink. That's what you used!!?! HOLY COW BELLS! This is amazing! Just one question... why is the paper yellow?
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it's not yellow lol! I took the photo at night and the light makes the paper look yellow. xD And no, it's a long stick and i used an ink pot. We basically dipped long art sticks (look like kebab sticks) and stuck it in ink, and drew. :)

Look. Here's a better picture. :)

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