Fairytale ending

1) Babe I cry myself to sleep at night,
Just coz I know that I can’t hold you tight.
This is all just too real for me,
I can only dream of what we can be,
I want a better tomorrow,
One where I don’t feel sorrow,
Just one day where my heart doesn’t ache
Knowing I can’t have you.
Oh babe I’ve risked too much and gained too little

c) Please say you love me too,
Coz baby all I want is you.
Just say that you’ll help me through.
Please just say you’ll save me from the dark.
Make it all right,
So I don’t have to cry anymore,
So I don’t have to hurt no more.
Oh why can’t you see how much it hurts me?
To hear your voice,
Every single day,
With the knowledge that you are hers,
That I’ll never have my chance at a fairytale ending.
I gave it all up for you,
Wish you’d do the same, ooh.
Everyday I’d shed a silver gleaming tear or two just for you.
Just to make you see that I’d stake it all for a chance with you,
A chance to have my happy ending
A chance to just stop pretending.

2) There was a point where I had my life planned,
I could see every moment,
How come I never saw you?
Or what you’d do? To my heart…
Then there was a point where I thought love was it,
All I needed to have it all,
Then why did it make me fall,
So far…
c)

3) I dreamt about you every night,
Hope that it’s still all right,
Hope that I’ll wake up and see you next to me,
Hope that we were meant to be…
I wish that you came to me instead of her,
I could make you happy boy,
I could make you see all that we could be.
c)

<end> I die here…
Slowly painfully,
My heart aches,
I thought love was all,
So why did I fall?
I wish I never met you,
So I wouldn’t feel so much pain,
But I guess I’m kinda lucky,
I love you all the same…

Well written, honestly! I love the theme. It describes what I used to go through perfectly. I even made up my own tune for it, which means its chatchy. Just remember that lyrics are just like poetry: poetry sounds best if it all rimes in the same timing. Its good, well done!

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The first thing that struck me was the formatting. Right now, the spacing really doesn't make these lyrics easy to read. When you go to post a new topic, there are various formatting options at the bottom of the screen. In addition, next to the Submit button, there is a Preview button. I suggest that you preview your lyrics posts next time to check that they're nice and reader-friendly before you hit submit.

The next thing I noticed was the grammar. It was not the best, especially with regards to punctuation. Lyrics follow the same rules of grammar as regular writing. Not following these rules makes your lyrics difficult to understand, especially since your reviewers do not have the benefit of listening to the song. Next time, make sure your lyrics are properly punctuated; it will make them easier to read and understand.