Illusion

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An illusion,
what is it?
is it a trick,
is it a drink,
is it magic,
is it my eyes,
is it my mind,
is it my imagination,
is it an impression,
is it my life,
is it my world,
is it real?
or does it just seem to be?

i really like this it seems like it like your not really sure what your talking about but you stay very close to the topic evenn though you like it all make belive and nothing is very known about it . its very good but i would have italiced what i thought was important in the poem.
love is not what you can hold its what you feel in your heart for the ones you love



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