Please do not rush, take your time to write your first post. Read other's posts first and when you've finished writing your post, use the spell check.
Read over your post twice before submitting and then once you have submitted it, read the previous post (and posts relating to your character) and your post again. If everything is sound, then leave it, if you feel it isn't fluent, edit it appropriately.
Please remember to check other's character profile posts when posting something relating to their character.
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You may also be contacted about your post as this is a Learner's storybook. Improving the quality is the number one objective for us and, I'm sure, you too.
- You describe the walk up to your monday morning breakfast and perhaps have a conversation with someone in the queue, to which you are told off or something.
- You describe what you are seeing in the hall from your character's point of view and go through the thought processes of your character.
- You meet the 'new boy' Mr Brown and start a conversation over your breakfast, timidly checking your watch for the time so of 0800 hours so you can dig in.
Up to you, but I'd like to see one of you be confident and jump for that first post!
Ben makes some awesome suggestions so listen to him and just go for it. Don't worry about making mistakes, we'll be on hand to help and anything that doesn't go to plancan be changed
