on moving bodies

Hello there. I'm a writer, like you, and a Bokonist. Bokonism is a religion based entirely on shameless lies made up by our untrustworthy prophet, Bokonon. If you cannot understand the brilliance of a religion based on lies then you cannot understand my work. Here's an example of the subject matter a Bokonist like myself might write about:

on moving bodies

When I was thirteen
my mentor asked me
what I want to be
when I grow up.
I said: I wanted to be
a theoretical physicist.
He gave me my first gun
told me nothing is free.

Either that or
everything is.

busy busy busy

*cough*

Well.

Don't know exactly how to respond to that, but hey! Glad you joined. Hope you'll find what you wanted out of this site. If you have a question, ask me, or a mod (the peeps with the green names. They're pretty awesome.).

-Ninj

Hello!

Well, Bokonism. Ohkay.

Oh well, hope to see you around soon!

~Lava

lol

thanks guys. And if you have any questions about bokonism feel free to ask. I'm pretty much just making up stuff as I go along.

Wait so is bokonism a real religion or like a fake one you made up? I am very confused and I am supposed to be the one helping you. This is very.... awkward.

Anyway YWS is a great way to improve your writing no matter what type you do or what religion you are. If you post something and need reviews the best ways to get them are, review more yourself, ask for reviews in the forum Will Review For Food, and just get around the site. The more people see you around the more they will want to review and read your work. An avatar helps with this. It is something to recognize you by.

A good ways to get to know people are the chat room, time waters and games, storybooks, groups, pages, and blogs.

Feel free to P.M. me if you have any questions.

A. S.

I approve, good sir. So hard.