Though Ill have to say number 2 is the best one.
On number one the copy and pasted white highlights look bad, just go back and hand do them instead of being lazy.
Also the face is a pretty 3d piece of work, something you didn't portray. Heavier shading around the nose and cheeks will help define this.
Just shade half the face.
Add in some more colors or shades or something.
I like the pose on the second one. However the feet are too big, whether with perspective or not.
You have shades, but no highlights?
The last one is my least favorite. Its mainly the face. Its so flat looking and the anime eyes throws it off. Its mainly the face but the black shorts could use some more grey and white.
You make me want to color with not black lines.
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
The second is my favourite too. The third one's body is totally out of proportion to the head, but the second one is really good. Nice work on that one.
Got YWS?
"Most of us have far more courage than we ever dreamed we possessed."
- Dale Carnegie
wow, those are some really good pictures, i like the first and second one best, but as the other people said the third one is out of proportion, and the white streaks on the first one are a little out of place, and degrades the picture. otherwise great job, and keep doing more of em.
Life's a B*tch, slap it upside the head.
Dargquon Ql'deleodna: (n) "Dar-qu-on Kel-del-ode-na" something i made up that sounded cool, partially based off of the Drow Drizzt Do'Urden's name style
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
thats brilliant got any other art lol i liked the third one more it was very intresting second fav was the first one then the last fav was of course is the second one
Last edited by zell on Sun Apr 02, 2006 9:06 pm, edited 1 time in total.
