Left On The Shores Of Reality

I’m worried that the worst is yet to come,
All because I'm letting you go,
Letting you go.
I've been thinking that I could find a way past my mistakes,
And for being the one that's always making you wait.
Leaving you here outside,
I can't deny,
I can't deny.

Now I'm left on the shores of reality.
Was I wrong?
Was I wrong for letting you fall to your knees?
Stuck in an unending tragedy.
Was I wrong?
Was I wrong, for knowing you were falling for me?

It's time to move on to a better place,
With someone else.
Cause where you are right now,
And where you want to be,
It's not with me.

At least now I know that,
You’re not coming back for me no.
My heart's torn into pieces,
I just want you to see,
The truth behind what we've been through,
There's not much left to explain.

I'm just left on the shores of reality.
Was I wrong?
Was I wrong?

Hi-ya!
Good poem but it's just a little simple. My favourite line is actually the heading so great job there. The main thing I would suggest is to try to use other poetic devices such as metaphors and simile in order to captivate your readers and make the poem as a whole more interesting. Over all you most powerful line was really intriguing and your idea was good.
-Blossom


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