Key to my Heart

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Hey everyone! I had the sudden splurge to draw and came up with this, so I thought I should share! I am new at drawing hands and stuff, criticism is appreciated!(:
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Hi- this is pretty good. I really like the idea behind it. I would think about pronouncing the wrist more though, especially at the top of it. The bone in the bottom of your hand leads straight into your wrist, but the top of your hands goes in quite a ways, to make the wrist much more slender than what you have here.

Otherwise, I think this was very good- hands are extremely difficult, especially the segway into the wrist.
Nice job.

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Hi Kr1117! I really, really like these, and I applaud the fact that you even attempted drawing hands. I'm not saying that I'm great at drawing hands, but remember, I'm critiquing this from a viewer's perspective.

:arrow: As Persephoneia said, the wrist needs to be more pronounced. Anatomically, the hand's fingers are very slender, just judging by the size of the circumference of the wrist.

:arrow: Remember to keep the hand looking natural. It sometimes helps to dangle your own hand in the air and make a sketch of what you see, specifically how your fingers are aligned. In reality, humans don't pose their fingers in the position seen in this picture. How a human's fingers hang is determined by the length of the tendons in each. As you will notice, the pointer finger, when in a natural position, lingers higher than the middle finger, and the middle finger lingers higher than the ring finger. The pinky finger hangs higher than the ring and middle fingers, but lower than the pointer. And there you have the human hand! Most likely the finest example of a drawing of the human hand in art history is located on the ceiling of the Sistine Chapel, in Michelangelo's "Creation of Man," a.k.a., "Creation of Adam."

:arrow: On the pointer finger of your drawing, the bones aren't exactly positioned right. The proximal phalanges in your drawing are smaller than the middle phalanges, where in reality, it is the other way around. Here's a diagram that may help:

http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl= ... x=94&ty=74

Anyway! I love the concept of this drawing, and the key necklace and heart bracelet turned out very well, indeed! I hope this helps!

- Abigail




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Thanks for the reviews!(: They helped!
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