Satan the Businessman

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Tue Jan 24, 2006 8:27 am
Griffinkeeper says... · Tue Jan 24, 2006 8:27 am
I'm going to lock this thread. The picture has been taken down, so no further criticism can be ventured. Sponson, Bobo, if you wish to discuss proper critique techniques, make a thread in the Writing Tips forum. I'm sure you will find some answer there.

Dono, if you have a revision, go ahead and PM me and I'll unlock this thread. In the meantime...
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Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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