Hello Mystery. First off, welcome to YWS! I’m Lily! Secondly, I shall review!
So, I think this is a really nice concept, but there is so much more you could do with it. I’m not saying anything nearly like that. But I think color and/or shading would make this far more impressive.
I can imagine the thick, hearty shades of color=#004000]green[/color]or red that you could use on this along with some shading would give this more dimension.
But I think the outline itself is wonderful though. If the heart were a smidge smaller and the outline heavier, right off the bat, I would have thought of this as a very well-done tattoo design.
Also, since you’re new to YWS, I figured I should point you towards the Welcome Mat where you’ll have a chance to introduce yourself and make lots of new friends.
~lilymoore
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Hey Welcome to YWS xD If you need help with anything you can PM me or just got to the chat room! Now on with the review! I really liked this! I like how the stem attaches to the heart, and how the vine raps around the leaf on the top right. But, like Lily said it could use color, or something to make it pop.
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Hi MissMystery! Welcome to YWS! I hope you get some good reviews here, as well as do a little bit of reviewing yourself.
I love the idea behind this drawing, and I agree with Lily that some bright colors would do it a lot of good. I think it might look cool if the vines were almost strangling the heart flower, and it sort of had to bulge out in areas. Just a thought.
I really, really, really like this piece. The stem and leaves are beautiful. I think you should definitely smudge the lines a little, and make them darker as well. I also think shading or coloring with red or maybe green and purple would look amazing. If you did color it, add lighting to show the shadows and lightness on it. Great job, keep doing the amazing artwork!
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Hello Miss, I really like the drawing. he heart was great (better than any of mine) but my only problem was with the vines. Personally, I thik there should have been more vines. Also I think they should be thicker. Another thing I missed when looking at your drawing was shading and shadows. I think, if added it would bring more life to your drawing. Good Luck. -Brook
*Late* Welcome to YWS, MissMystery! I'm Heather, but your free to call me just about anything you want. =D
Anyways, on to the art! It's a nice drawing, but to be honest, it is a little cliche. I've seen several drawings along those lines before, where it's a heart with thorns in it, or an arrow through it, etc. The drawing itself is simple as well-but simple is often good! But yes, other than the mental aspect, it is a nice drawing. I have to say I agree with Lily on her suggestions. =]
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I personally dont think you should change anything on this piece, its perfect the way it is and its yours. thats the beauty of art really, every motion of your pencil is flawless and there wont be another like it any where in this universe unless you have a clone of some precise sort(unlikely) I like the concept behind it. I'm guessing its something along the lines of: for every rose given a heart is entagled in love. well only you would know what it is that you meant exactly. anyhows...you have some real talent crawling within in you, now its time to make it run! keep up the work.
I love your drawing, though I would like to see a colored version. I think if you chose the right colors then it would surely make the heart stand out, and the vines more captivating. Nice conept you've got going here, it's really captivating. Great job and keep it up!
lol xD Hope you like it!
