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Sommers' Crash chap 1 pt 1
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Sat Sep 04, 2010 5:39 pm
Wheadee
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Sat Sep 04, 2010 5:39 pm
I AM PULLING THIS NOVEL DOWN FROM THE SITE
Last edited by Wheadee on Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:06 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:40 pm
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Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:40 pm
Great writing! I like that the dialogue flows and feels very natural. It would be nice if you added the main character's name and gender, though. I got a bit confused. The story seems interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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