I like how they're all in different poses and you actually went to color them, instead of leaving it black and white like I do. >.< My only suggestion would to be to go back and color in the little white spots, I find those to be annoying but it's your work and you did and amazing job, nonetheless. Keep up the good work! Cheers,
~Pink
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are. -W. Somerset Maugham
The glare seems a bit strong, maybe from a camera? I think that reduces the potency of some of the colors. Other than that, the picture is awesome. You've captured not only their physical appearance, but their attitudes, too. Just darling.
Keep drawing!
--Glim
"If you live to be 100, I hope I live to be 100 minus 1 day, so I never have to live without you." ~Winnie the Pooh
Wow, this is really good, and I like how you got the colors correct. I also think the different pose ties the whole picture together, and makes it seem like something an animator would draw. But I also think you could work a little bit on centering the faces. Great job!
Ok, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening.
Well first off, this is a cute picture, but it needs a good bit of work. I would consider this more of a doodle, since you said it was just from memory. Anyway now for the review. Forgive me in advance, I can't see them very well.
GRUMPY: Everything on him seems a bit squished. I think that you should have made him a bit larger, it would give a better effect than to have him so small. I know that you had only limited space, but I would put them on different sheets of paper if it was that necessary. I like his beard, but his eyes seem weird to me. I can tell he is looking up, but you have it to where he looks cross-eyed. Also his face is weirdly shaped. I think that you should study the characters a bit more, and start drawing them piece by piece to learn how it works.
Sneezy: I liked almost everything on this one, except how you misshaped him. Again I also think he should be larger than he is.
Doc: The belt is a bit misshapen, and he looks angry, which he never was, but other than that perfect!
Happy: Work on the clothes a bit. I also think you should darken the lines a bit. Give some emphasis on important details.
Dopey: I think that on Dopey you should work mostly on the ears. They are very distracting, and not in a good way either. I think that you should look at how they are drawn, and work on it some more. Also his hat doesn't really connect right with his head. This can be easily fixed by drawing the edges in a downwardish kind of way. I know I'm not making sense haha. Like a curve I suppose you could say. I also think his clothes could be improved. His shoes shouldn't be so buklie either.
Bashful: Other than the fact that he has almost no face I like him. I think you should define his face more. It is what makes him bashful after all, so it needs definition.
Sleepy: I love how you drew him on a pillow. It really shows his character. He seems a bit flat though. I would work on drawing lines to show that the characters have curves. It's complicated, but a very honored talent.
Other than those few little nit pics, I though this was nice. I hope my review didn't disappoint you.
If you need anything do feel free to pm me. I am always around.
-Flower-
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.
