More Photography Attempts.

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Okay, so now I know FOR SURE that this will show. Got the right link. ^_^
Criticisms, comments, opinions, thoughts? Thanks!! :)


"X Marks the Spot"

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"Ocean Crow"

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"The Rare Surfer"

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"The Arch"

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"Crab Traps" :/

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"Pinwheels"

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"In the Taffy Shop" ^_______^

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Thanks for reviewing! :)




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Amazing!!!!

1 I like how the foot prints cross!

2 I like the waves, but the bird is a little blurry, I understand how hard it is to get a flying bird on camera is.

3 cool, the surfer must be having fun!

4 My fav! I love the flowers! This kind of landscape blows my mind!

5 I like the idea, but I don't like how just one of the traps are clear, just my opinion.

6 I like how you put the pinwheel on the top of the pic.

7 I like how you captured this picture! The wrappers are so pretty!

Wow, your really good at this!
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THE FIRST ONE'S QUALITY!!!
They are all all right, but No.1 stands out for me.




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Hello again!

1. Love it. Another great picture.

2. Really like the idea, but I think this one is hurting from being in B/W. I want to see the blue and soft purple hues that I know are waiting in the sea and fog.

3. Ha. Nice. But I wish I could see it not in B/W. The highlights are a little blown out on the bottom, and I don't like the glaring white.

4. Yes. Wonderful. The color transitions are amazing, at its definitely got that northern CA feel. And the wildflowers are gorgeous.

5. REALLY well done. This picture makes me very happy, probably one of the best that you've done. It is not too busy, and you've focused really well for the subject matter.

6. This is a good picture, but I almost think that you could cut out the harbor below. The blue is a little distracting, and I think the picture would look fine with the land as the bottom. You've done a really good job at capturing the flowiness of the streamers!

7. I certainly like the idea for this one, but there is too much noise in the back for me. I think this is another picture that might work better in full color.

I hope my reviews helped. Let me know if I can clarify anything I said. Out of curiosity, what kind of camera do you have?

Like I said in my other review, you've got TONS of talent. I can't wait to see more from you!
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Hello! Fantastic pictures!! :D

1. I love this one a lot. Maybe try cropping it a teensy bit on the right side though to get rid of the footprint that isn't a part of the X? I don't know...that's just my opinion.

2. I think this should be a bit warmer, like in a nice sepia tone. It's a great shot though.

3. This one needs a bit more of a blue-ish tint to it. I really like it.

4. Amazing shot! I love all of the colors.

5. I really like all of the detail and how it fades in certain areas.

6. This one is my favorite...I love the colors :D but I think that you should crop the bottom a bit to make the water take up less of the picture so that the focus is more on the pinwheel.

7. I think that this one really needs to be in color, it looks unappealing otherwise. It's a great shot but without color everything seems to blend together and look busy.

Love the pics! Keep snappin' em.
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