Ode to the Toad

This is a Haiku I wrote in like, 2nd Grade for some assignment. Then someone stole it and posted it by the library.

Eyes Bulge, Ugly Frog
Jump! Plop into the mud!
Very dirty frog...

WOO!!!
I KNOW!!

Copyright © 2006 by Alex Lucier

NOW WHAT RUDY!!!

I think that I am currently blinded....

I honestly think that , as of right now, when we walk out of the room, I will punch you!

It reminds me of that toad project that I did last year... "Here is a picture of my ugly frog..." *continues paper*

The green Toad goes Moo
Then it will moo an Ah-choo
Blow your nose snot toad

There is my toad haiku

OMFG!
Im not going to crit YOUR Haiku on MY Haiku thread!

Just crit mine already!
Although there isn't much to crit...

I did critic it... I said that I am currently blinded and that I like it...

And I'm going to punch you on the way out
HahahahahahahahaKa! Moo!

Haikus aren't supposed to rhyme. So your two mentions of "frog" shouldn't be, because technically they rhyme. Not good.

Play around with it a bit and see what you can make of it!

I think it is very cool and random. I like random things. It is very good my stuff that I wrote in 3rd grade is very bad.

Hmmm... I wonder whether to replace Frog with something else, or to redo the whole line...

I'll think aboot it

I think it's cute, though if it's a haiku about toads why mention frogs? Frogs and toads are very different things. The main difference being that frogs are far cuter and most toads are poisonousand tend to attack me. *Hides from the toad pond*

It's...err..fabulous, darling. Absolutely outstanding. The best thing posted on this site since when Nate wrote "Test". Ahh, a defining moment in the history of great prose
Lol. It made me chuckle a wee bit. And TBR, I'm sorry, but....moo? The green toad goes...moo....?!

i don't know you, but hey, i love you!
(but just to tell you, toads don't exist. it's all a lie.)