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Some pictures I took that incorporate the sun. :smt004
There is absolutely no editing in these what-so-ever. Well other that resizing.

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Hey Jemjive.
1. Ooh pretty!
2. you needed to change the angle.
3. The color in the clouds are pretty.
4. The colors look kind of edited. It may be that I don't see the sun rise or set much.
5. Nice angle.
6. I like this one the most.
Very nice pictures.
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Heya jemjive!

1. Oh wow, this is really gorgeous. Where was this photograph taken? I think it's really great. However, I'm not sure if this has to do with the quality of your camera but some areas are sort of blurred.

2. I like how the sun rays look like they are going into the gaps of the persons hair if you know what I mean. Although, I agree with ladypurple in saying that it would have looked better if you had changed the angle.

3. I have to nit-picks for this. It's overall pretty, colorful and a great photograph.

4. Seriously, where did you go?! It's like a painting, I especially like the trees on the left hand side, it makes it look very realistic!

5. These photographs just keep getting better and better. It's so yellow, again like a painting. This is one of my favourite's!!!

6. Converse. Lots of people take photographs' of them and most just look a bit boring. I think what made this one good is that you incorporated the sun into it.

Keep Clicking!!!!
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It was a place called GoodSpirit Lake. And yeah the first one is a bit blurry but it was taken off the back of a moving motorboat lol
Your motor's unstable,
Your like an
Undwinding
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Hey Jemjive, Gsp here! I will be your reviewer for this evening. :)

I tend to rip things to shreds, so I'm sorry if I seem harsh. I'm only trying to help.

I'm only just warming up to photography, so bear with me.

1.) I really like this. It's blurry and slightly tilted, but I think it makes it unique, as does the wake of the boat. :)

2.) This one's okay. It'd be better without the telephone pole and lines, but there's not much you can do about that.

3.) This one's probably one of my favorites. I love how the clouds are peach in one part and gray-blue in another. Beautiful.

4.) I LOVE THE COLORS HERE. :D This one's definitely my favorite, hands down. Absolutely beautiful.

5.) This one's awesome. I like the color and how the sun reflects off of the water. The grass at the bottom gives it a really good edge.

6.) I like the colors in this one too. It's a unique angle and a very good shot.

All-in-all, love 'em. Keep taking pictures.

Happy YWSing!

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Hi jemjive CaptianRandom here,
I really like some of these photos, I LOVED the photo of the sun set and the different colors, i also liked the clouds and the little sections of pink in the white and blue. I hope to see more of your photos, hopefuly more amazing sun sets. keep up the good work.

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Hi Jemjive!

1) This is one of your better pictures, allthough the horizon is crooked. This looks like it was taken on a beach? If so, I wish you could have gotten some foam and more detail on that wave. But I really like the was the sun looks! It reminds me of a supernova, because of the horizontal clouds and vertical sunburst!

2) I really like the idea for this picture, but the placement of the sun throws it off for me. It kind of looks like a really big Adam's apple on your model. Play with the angles here, and you might get a better picture without the powerlines/odd sun placement.

3) The color on these clouds is amazing! I love it! But as a picture, I feel like there needs to be something more to drag me in. But, really, this is one of my favorites. It looks like cotton candy.

4) O_o. Where did you go to get a sunset that looked like that? It is wonderful! I've got nothing to say here.

5) This is my absolute favorite picture. I love the way the colors blend together. This looks like it was painted, and is beautiful. Well done!

6) I'd count this one as another one of my favorites, if it wasn't a converse picture. It really is a great picture, but the converse cliche makes me not like it so much. If you put something else in the picture, I think this would be the best picture you have. The sun looks incredible on the grass. Really well done. This picture shows great photography skill, but try and distinguish yourself as different!

You've got some great talent, as far as I can tell. I apologize that I was so nitpickey. I really like all of these pictures!
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3, 4, and 5 are my favs. Really good!! keep on clicking!
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first image is my favorite,
however i like how you captured the light in each photo
well done
keepshooting
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Hi jemjive CaptianRandom here

I loved the 3rd and 4th photos they were amazing. The 3rd one didn't include the sun in it but gave the clouds a really cool shadow color and the 4th photo was even more amazing with the different colors in the clouds, they were so amazing i loved them. Keep up the good work and i hope to see more of your photos.

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Hey! I love all of these pictures! I don't have much to say but here you go:

1) This is a great sunset/sunrise, although personally I would have taken a closer shot.*That's just me

2) This is adorable :) Is it you?

3) Very pretty clouds! Great colours.

4) This is one my favourite! It's SO pretty! It looks like an African sunset!My goodness this is actually amazing! It must have been beautiful :) Where did you take this?

5) This picture is great too! I love how the whole mood of the picture is very mellow, because it's orange.

6) This is cute too :) Nice shoes ;)



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