The Shadows of My Past (Stuff From Three Years Ago)

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1. The Shadow Lord notes
They call him Gore Grinder. He became king about year 1902. In the Shadow World every two hundred years there is a compition in the Shadow World this how it goes: Twenty Shadow Killers will be sent to Earth who ever captures the most humans (without killing them) and brings them back to the Shadow Kingdom to have their souls burned, will become the king for two-hundred years until the next event comes around. He got the name Gore Grinder because he likes to tear humans into little tiny peices.

2. The Shadow World --- landscape notes (you can skip anything if you find it boring.)
What lies beneath the surface: The ground is crusty and black. It is weak in some areas. If you happen to step on a weak spot you will fall . . . And there is nothing Beneath the surface. Once you fall there is no way back to the surface. You will fall until you die and when you are dead you're corpse will fall until it decomposes and turns into dust.

A land made for giants: The mountains that tower on the Shadow World's surface can range from hundreds of feet high, to hundreds of thousands of feet high. A sand dune can range from thousands of feet high or smaller. The Base of dune can be so large that one dune could coverup a distance two times the size of New York City.

Night & Day: At night it's too dark for the human eye. The only way for them to see is if they reach into the corrupt part of there soul. During the day the sky is foggy and gray. The Shadows do not come out durning the day. The light from the sky does wonders for the human eye, It will let them see with perfect clarity. The light is so great that even the blind can see.

Shadow lava: The are volcanoes on the Shadow World are just one hundred feet bigger than the largest volcanoe on earth. The largest volcano in the Shadow World is called Necroinferno. The Shadow World lava is dark-red with twirling strands of gray mixed in. The purpose for this lava is rather simple. The superior, and nuetral parts of the soul are removed and put in a cryotank to preserve them. Then the cryotank is taken to Mt. Necroinferno and emptied into the lava. Thus sacrificinf the soulds to the God of Malice.

The God of Malice:
Unlike the Gods on our planet the God of Malice has no church and does not expect to be worshipped. The God of Malice is the Shadow Worlds lifeline and he expects to be fed every two hundred years. If he is not fed with Superior and Nuetral souls he will cut the line a couse Mt. Necroinferno to blowup destroying the Shadow World and all who live there. The God of Malice created the Shadow World. The Shadow King works for the God of Malice and controls the Shadow army The Shadow army protects the Shadow World, even though they never need protecting. The Shadow King picks twenty soldiers to go gather humans on earth ever two-hundred years.
The God of Malice cannot be destroyed. Once his world his destroyed he will make another one and go torture another planet.

Part: I
The Shadow Killer
Chapter: 1
Trevors room had white walls, blue carpet, a computer on the west side off the room with a screensaver that showed Bart Simpson pulling downhis pants revealling a huge boner. On the north side was Trevor's closet full of a varity of different death metal and thrash metal shirts, and next to the closet was a shelve full of Stephen King books like It and The Stand, Stephen King was Trevor favorite author and probuly always will be. Over on the south side was a window nect to another book shelve, this book shelve had a huge varity of different authors. Looking out that window you can see trees, trees, and more trees. On the east side of the room was Trevor sleeping in his king size waterbed and rapped in his smooth cotton sperm stained blanket.
Trevor woke up laughing his ass off, he didn't know why he was laughing, he thought it might have just been an unconcious thing but then he remembered yesterday he had been caught looking at porno on his ipod in class, when he was supposed to be reading. Just thinking abiut it again madelaugh even harder. Then his dad screamed from the other room. "GO-TO-BED!"
"I can't sleep!" He couldn't he had been waking up and going back to sleep all night, sometimes because his stomach hurt, one time he woke up with a burning pain in his temples, and one other time he had a real annoying itch on the underside of his balls.
"DONT MAKE ME COME IN THERE"---his dad coughed and youcould hear him spitting on the ground---"IF I HEAR YOU LAUGH ONE MORE TIME IM GONNA GO IN THERE AND GIVE YOU A WHUPPIN!"
"Calm down I'll go to bed, stop yelling!"
Then Trevor could here his dads padded foot steps coming towards his room. His dad stepped in the woom with a studded belt in one hand and a ciggarette in the other hand.
"No Dad not the belt!" Trevor was scared now his dad only used the belt when he was really mad.
John was his name


(All of this is as I wrote it when I was thirteen in seventh grade. I kept all the spelling and grammar errors.)
"I know I can't slow down, I can't hold back
Though you know I wish I could
Oh no, there aint no rest for the wicked
Until we close our eyes for good." ---Cage the Elephant 'Ain't No Rest for the Wicked'




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Thefadedphotograph wrote:1. The Shadow Lord notes
They call him Gore Grinder. He became king about year 1902. In the Shadow World every two hundred years there is a compition in the Shadow World this how it goes: Twenty Shadow Killers will be sent to Earth who ever captures the most humans (without killing them) and brings them back to the Shadow Kingdom to have their souls burned, will become the king for two-hundred years until the next event comes around. He got the name Gore Grinder because he likes to tear humans into little tiny peices.

2. The Shadow World --- landscape notes (you can skip anything if you find it boring.) I DIDNT FIND ANY OF THIS BORING :)
What lies beneath the surface: The ground is crusty and black. It is weak in some areas. If you happen to step on a weak spot you will fall . . . And there is nothing Beneath the surface. Once you fall there is no way back to the surface. You will fall until you die and when you are dead you're corpse will fall until it decomposes and turns into dust.

A land made for giants: The mountains that tower on the Shadow World's surface can range from hundreds of feet high, to hundreds of thousands of feet high. A sand dune can range from thousands of feet high or smaller. The Base of dune can be so large that one dune could coverup a distance two times the size of New York City.

Night & Day: At night it's too dark for the human eye. The only way for them to see is if they reach into the corrupt part of there soul. During the day the sky is foggy and gray. The Shadows do not come out durning the day. The light from the sky does wonders for the human eye, It will let them see with perfect clarity. The light is so great that even the blind can see.

Shadow lava: The are volcanoes on the Shadow World are just one hundred feet bigger than the largest volcanoe on earth. The largest volcano in the Shadow World is called Necroinferno. The Shadow World lava is dark-red with twirling strands of gray mixed in. The purpose for this lava is rather simple. The superior, and nuetral parts of the soul are removed and put in a cryotank to preserve them. Then the cryotank is taken to Mt. Necroinferno and emptied into the lava. Thus sacrificinf the soulds to the God of Malice.

The God of Malice:
Unlike the Gods on our planet the God of Malice has no church and does not expect to be worshipped. The God of Malice is the Shadow Worlds lifeline and he expects to be fed every two hundred years. If he is not fed with Superior and Nuetral souls he will cut the line a couse Mt. Necroinferno to blowup destroying the Shadow World and all who live there. The God of Malice created the Shadow World. The Shadow King works for the God of Malice and controls the Shadow army The Shadow army protects the Shadow World, even though they never need protecting. The Shadow King picks twenty soldiers to go gather humans on earth ever two-hundred years.
The God of Malice cannot be destroyed. Once his world his destroyed he will make another one and go torture another planet.

Part: I
The Shadow Killer
Chapter: 1
Trevors room had white walls, blue carpet, a computer on the west side off the room with a screensaver that showed Bart Simpson pulling down SPACE his pants revealing a huge boner. On the north side was Trevor's closet full of a varity of different death metal and thrash metal shirts, and next to the closet was a shelve full of Stephen King books like It and The Stand PERIOD Stephen King was Trevor favorite author and probuly always will be. Over on the south side was a window NEXT to another book shelve, this book shelve had a huge varity of different authors. Looking out that window you can see trees, trees, and more trees. On the east side of the room was Trevor sleeping in his king size waterbed and rapped in his smooth cotton sperm stained blanket.
Trevor woke up laughing his ass off, he didn't know why he was laughing, he thought it might have just been an unconcious thing but then he remembered yesterday he had been caught looking at porn on his ipod in class, when he was supposed to be reading. Just thinking abOut it again made SPACE laugh even harder. Then his dad screamed from the other room. "GO-TO-BED!"
"I can't sleep!" He couldn't he had been waking up and going back to sleep all night, sometimes because his stomach hurt, one time he woke up with a burning pain in his temples, and one other time he had a real annoying itch on the underside of his balls.
"DONT MAKE ME COME IN THERE"---his dad coughed and you SPACE could hear him spitting on the ground---"IF I HEAR YOU LAUGH ONE MORE TIME IM GONNA GO IN THERE AND GIVE YOU A WHUPPIN!"
"Calm down I'll go to bed, stop yelling!"
Then Trevor could here his dads padded foot steps coming towards his room. His dad stepped in the woom with a studded belt in one hand and a ciggarette in the other hand.
"No Dad not the belt!" Trevor was scared now his dad only used the belt when he was really mad.
John was his name


(All of this is as I wrote it when I was thirteen in seventh grade. I kept all the spelling and grammar errors.)
when you grow up you realize that Prince Charming is not as easy to find as you thought. You realize the bad guy is not wearing a black cape and he's not easy to spot; he's really funny, and he makes you laugh, and he has perfect hair and isnt wearing a black cape and easy to spot Lots of Love Jenn



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