My uniform was stuck to my back with sweat,(maybe you could try "from")
Another thing I should think was a problem is the fact that your work is too crowded, try and separate it a bit.
I like the way you write. It's very clear, and to the point. I also spotted no spelling errors as I read through. Your story is also interesting. Good luck with it
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