Three Letters

FireandIce326 wrote:If I had to say three letters,
To you before I die,
Then I would have to pick,
First I then L then Y.
They stand for how I feel,
And that is more than true.
Three simple little letters,
Meaning I Love You.

I'm going to have to say that I truly love this! There's nothing wrong with it to me. I love the way you set the three letters off in bold rather than leave them to blend in. It helps it stand out more. I know I'm not the best person to be taking pointers from, but if you need me to review anything, just PM me, and if you need any help, just ask!

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I thought this poem was really sweet. Well done.

I thought this poem was really sweet even though short, I would have liked it too be a bit longer but still, good.

Wow! This is really good. Its short, yet sweet. The whole poem flowed really well, the rhyming carried the whole thing along. The "First" in the fourth line sounds a bit out of place and kind of disrupts the rhythm a bit, but not majorly. But that was the only thing I spotted that could be improved. Keep writing!! You're awesome at it!

Very simple and cute.
It was short but thorough. Like it got right to the meaning. Showing that you dont need a lot of detail to express something.
I like it because it was simply short and had a lot of character. It has a nice flow to it. Although I think it would've been better with more detail. =) Overall it was awesome.
-Libby.