Finally letting go

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Not a day goes by,
Where I don't think about you;
That's how I know,
What I feel is true.

The way I care for you,
No words can explain;
To feel this way about another,
I doubt it'll feel the same.

It has almost been two years,
We've been on and off since;
So I think it's best to be straight,
Instead of dropping hints.

I've got things on my mind,
They worry me everyday;
Expressing words in this form,
Makes them easier to say.

When I look at things,
For how they really are;
Reality concludes,
We won't go far.

You have your ways,
Of making me give in;
Finding myself in places,
I have never been in.

It hurts to be apart,
Yet pain when we're close,
Because I know I can't be with,
The boy I want the most.

I dont want to become,
Too attached;
Only to be left with,
Pain to hatch.

I guess what I'm trying to say is,
it's better for us to let go;
They say,
'Sometimes when you love someone you have to let them go.'

Whatever happens next,
Memories of us I will retain;
I'll keep them running through my head,
Like blood to my veins.

Now it's about time,
For us to go our seperate ways;
I pray happiness continues,
Throughout the rest of our days.
Last edited by Fatimah on Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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That's really good poem
Keep it going
Huthaifa
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Thankyou Huthaifa :)
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really good. i love the simplicity of how its written and the feeling it has.




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Great poem. Simple and still passionate. Keep writing.
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Thankyou xangeleighfshox and GAM, I appreciate your comments :)
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