sad autumn day

Where leaves fall as the gravel crunches
Their shades of red orange and yellow
Make all feel so mellow

Winter comes near
As the frosty days we fear
The cold shall come once more
But not before the autumn arose

by pencilgirl( wrote it myself=0)

Hey there pencilgirl! I thought I'd do the honours.
I liked the poem, it was simple yet adorable. Just had a problem with the fact that there was no punctuation, but I could make out the message. Lovely picture, did you take that yourself or is it there to garnish the poem? It's lovely.
Good job...

Hiya Pencilgirl. I gotta say I enjoyed this poem. You didn't even have spelling errors (spelling is one of my enemies by the way). Keep it up.

I like the poem and the picture, though I think this would suit being in the poetry forums more. But heck, I'm probably very wrong. The clarity or the picture and poem are intune, which is really good as it gives me an insight to your opinion of the blossoming flower and how you can express your feelings using words.

The one thing I'm going to point out that there is not grammar used here. No capital letters, no nothing. What I would suggest is that you go over it and post it in the poetry sector for a real review on your work. Which I repeat, I loved. <3
Great job! The picture is really awesome to! Did you take it?

thank you all, these are the best comments i ever got since i came and joined this society. Ziggie, purple and now Crique i really enjoyed your review and yes i took the picture myself from a hill top i loved it so much i wrote a poem on it. sorry for the gramatic errors. once again thank you so much for the advice to put it on poetry forum i will