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Last edited by bluewaterlily on Mon Dec 06, 2010 12:53 am, edited 9 times in total.
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it seems like theirs too many sum beams...
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Hey there,


I prefer your first edited version to this one. I think the sunlight should be in the corner behind her, and should be pointed towards her feet, because if you look at the coloring of her, her head/torso area is significantly darker than the lower part, as if the light is cast downward from behind her... unless she has an awkward tan of sorts.

Anyway! I think there's a lot you can do with this -- as I said on the other version, the dark background strikes me as off because it's not lit up enough for such a strong light to be shining in. I do think the stars in the back do wonderful things for this image, and give it a more stellar like appearance. Lastly! Don't forget credit to the images used while posting unless you own rights to them. :)

Keep it up,
June
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Hello there. :D

Like the others, I prefer the first picture of the Goddess of Cosmos over this one, for many reasons. The other one was quite beautiful and glowing, while this one is more bursting and sort of uncoordinated. Let me explain my thinking.

I don't quite like the green background, and the way it clashes with the Goddess of the Cosmos and the light. It just doesn't give a pretty look to the picture. >.>
Also, the Goddess looks a tad too orange here. Editing is good, but don't over-do it.

Still, this was okay; I just preferred the other picture, is all! Oh, and thanks for remembering to include a link of the original. ;)

Luffly,
Mizz
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