Erm... I'd be right in thinking this isn't a poem right?
If so, I believe this belongs in the Community Forums, as this is a message. Maybe blog it, but a message like this is not appropriate for the poetry boards... if it isnt... poetry... ¬_¬
Alot of the time, im on here using my PS3 & my trusty usb keyboard. Dont expect much fancy quoting blocks... I shall do what I can. ;)
I would have to agree with nova-you wouldn't classify this as poetry. I understand what you were trying to write but you submitted it in the wrong place. I suggest next time you post this on your wall or your blog-it seems to me to be more of a joke or a recount of something that happened to you. I do have to say I did laugh at this after some confusion at the reason why you posted as a poem. However, this could become a poem if you expanded it which I believe you should-it's worded well, it has a good and funny twist at the end but just add to it and put it into stanzas, it would be good for a laugh.
Keep up the good work.
MWAHAHAHA! -RepublicOfCoter
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