The Cop Who Wanted Revenge (part 1)

Once upon a time (to be exact, 1990), there was a cop called Jack Slater. He was a mafia man, a cop, and a cook. He worked as a cop most of the week, on Saturdays he was a mafia boss and he was a Cook at other times, when needed. He was an adventurous man, with a daughter who is in college and a boy who goes to school.. One day, he woke up to find his boy kidnapped, and he went out to search for the bastard who kidnapped him. He eventually found the kidnapper, on top of a tall building. "Come and get him..." said Zeroh, the kidnapper. "I will give you money, anything, please..." replied Jack.
"Daddy, help me!" shouted Tim, the boy. Zeroh climbed onto the ledge and pulled Tim onto it too. "Too late now, Jack.." Jack quickly pulls out his gun and shoot Zeroh. Zeroh stumbles back, but he pulls Tim with him. They both fall to their deaths. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooo!!!" shouted Jack. Tearfully, he returned to his home. He told his daughter Jenny what happened, and they both went to sleep sad. The Next Day, he woke up and got dressed, ate and went to the police station. He met his good friends there: Kitty the cartoon cat, John the manager and Leo the doctor. "Ey guys, wanna go for a beer?" asked Jack. "Sure" everyone replied. They all went to the pub. It was happy hour, and there was a 1+1 sale. Everyone got 2 beers instead of 1. "So guys, what's up?" asked Jack. "Nothing much... just that John here, he wants to fire you." replied Leo. "Really John? After all I did for you?" Jack asked. TO BE CONTINUED SOMETIME NEXT WEEK

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Or maybe in a few days? who knows...

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I'm not sure if this is for real or not, so I don't know whether you want criticism or just attention.

hmm? i just wrote from mah "imaginashun" like all u guys got
i dunno, i guess criticism would work as I wanna get mah storeh rated.