Hello MiaParamore, I am new to YWS. The atmosphere around here is very inspiring. I couldn't stop myself from posting my work. I have written an article on Euthanasia;it's pros and cons under the General Articles category of the non-fiction section. I would be immensely grateful If you put forward your views about it. I would appreciate criticism as well! Thank you! I have given the link below - viewtopic.php?f=388&t=92734
Hi, i've asked a couple of people to read this now and like i have previously said i'd love as many people to have a look as possible to pick up on problems, so would you mind having a look at mine pleease? i'd be very grateful
I've already had a suggestion to make it easier to read and have taken out measures to do so, So, it's good that you review lengthy work, work.php?id=94099
Not many remember how life there began, in the lands amidst surrounding walls of stone and pools of deep darkness, but whilst they forget the secrets of the past, they begin to riddle the future with their growing lust for knowledge, greatness and power.
Will you review my work 'Great Entities- Chapter One' please? It's about a kid named Curtis who acts as an envoy and, in some cases, assassin, of many, many powerful entities. He'll do whatever it takes for the greater good. Thanks!
