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This is an OC of mine....
This was mostly practise at continuity (there are plenty of anatomy mistakes that I have corrected but not on these scanned versions :D )
They are all supposed to be drawings of the same person, so hopefully she looks similar-ish?!
And please ignore the constant paddle-hands, I was inexcusably lazy. :smt003

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Sleepwear and everyday clothing... yes, I know the arm is terrible....

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Two types of workwear; one office-y, the other waitress.

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Formal dress and Wedding dress

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Summer clothes and winter clothes. And coffee, of course. :smt003
Elizabeth: "There will come a moment when you will have a chance to show it. To do the right thing."
Jack: "I love those moments. I like to wave at them as they pass by."




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Hello, kidashka, and Yowsers!

I think these are all actually really good images, paddle hands or no paddle hands. :D I’ll just say overall that their great so I won’t sit here and go over each ones good parts. But I will mention a few things that didn’t quite settle right with me.

With the waitress look, something about the hair seems wrong. I think it’s because it’s a pony-tail. But Right now, it just kind of looks like she doesn’t have as much hair as I think she does.

With the formal dress, I’m not sure if it’s the angle that she’s holding her head at but her face looks very squished.

And lastly, the one that I actually did have a bigger problem with, is the winter one. She doesn’t look like the others. Her face is smaller and the ear muffs, which are too unalike to look like ear muffs, make her face look even smaller. It’s really the face and the fact that it’s so small that this makes me dislike the winter look the most. I think making the earmuffs smaller would make this less noticeable.

But the rest of these are without flaw, at least to my eyes.

Congrats!

~lilymoore
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.




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Hallooo! You know what? I really like these *likes* =D/ Your girls' bodies' proportions are good. I love the styles as well! =)) Also, you've drawn the hair well. =D/

I'm now off to review the deadly sins thingy. I think you need some pointers there. =D/ I'll post up a thread about art sketching tips. I know we've got a bunch of good sketchers roaming around here, and it's about time we share our styles and maybe we could help each other to improve.

~~ Jash ♥
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not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else.”


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