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LiveScreamWriting

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Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:49 am

LiveScreamWriting says... · Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:49 am

This is some of my photography work! It's my favorite pictures! Tell me what you think, please!
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But also because I realized, that this nightmare would never end.
“Never,” I heard thousands of demons whispers echo in the darkness.
Never, I repeated in my mind.
Never.
- Ellie Chavez

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DancingInTheRain

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Wed Jun 09, 2010 6:45 am

DancingInTheRain says... · Wed Jun 09, 2010 6:45 am

Wow! You really have talent! my favourites are numbers 4, 5, 6, 8, 9 and 10. You could add something else to the pictures, other than a few plants and gumboots etc. sorry if this is critical but i think it is missing something. Really awesome work!

from Dancing in the rain :smt002

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ArahniaSiddel

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Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:26 pm

ArahniaSiddel says... · Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:26 pm

WOW, this is a lot! I will try to review each one, but I might not get them all in the right order.

I also won't be able to tell you my favorites.

1. (four people sitting, black and white.) I like this a lot. Their hair blends into the background. For some reason this picture seems to have a deeper meaning.

3. (Half of girls face) I really like this. The sewing machine REALLY distracts me though. I find myself looking at that instead of her face. Maybe her head could be a bit lower? Or you could cut part of the picture off. Like this:

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2. (Girl with hair in face.) I really like this almost as much has 3. It seems that the girl has her face all scrunched up though. This kind of breaks the calm feeling.

4. This is really good, but it really isn't special. Anyone could take this. Maybe you could find a different angle.

5. I love this! Maybe you could take out some of the right side and top. I want to see more of the man or less of him. It is a really great shot though.

6. I would like to see the horses ears.

7. I love this. Even though it is just a shoe! I wouldn't make any changes.

8. I like this, but it seems that the main focus (the flower) is covered up by the bud.

9. I love this. Everything is perfect. It reminds me my mom, and it made me smile. The comb of the chicken is slightly cut off, but that really doesn't matter. I love the background the white building is awesome.

10. This picture is O.K. There is a lot going on in it besides the lady bug. Plus the lady bug is blurry. This makes it seem like it isn't the real focus.

11. This is also just O.K. It would be awesome to see the boots doing something. Jumping a puddle would be awesome! There just isn't much going on in this picture.

12. This is not better than 11. The other shoes are just distractions.

13. I really like this. It is awesome. I wouldn't make any changes.

14. I like this, but there is lots of distractions. The gray line at the bottom of the picture. The background. This is a great picture because the bird and horse are so close, but my eyes keep flipping between them. The horse seems blurry too.

15. I love this. The red of the building is great, but I think it might look better like this:

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That is just my opinion though.

16. This is way better than 11. and 12. It is nice that the boots are jumping. It would be better if I could tell what the background is though.

17. I love this, and I have nothing more to say.

<3

18. I don't know why this is on here. I think someone is getting ready for a party. Right? But, everything is so blurry. I think this may have a deeper meaning. Or it should because you put it up.

19. I like this, but not the plastic.

20. I love this and wouldn't change anything.

21. Hmmm I like the other ones with hair better.

22. Sorry my comments are getting shorter by the way. Maybe next time you should break it up more. I like the yellow background of this picture. I wish you would have focused on the shoe string more.

Keep up the good work,

A. S.

I will review for food!

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