At A Lake

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These are just a few pictures I took at Square Lake, in MN.



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Wow, these are really nice. I especially like the first two. I love the light in those two because they make the picture so much nicer, and it gives it more of an actual summery feel, so see the sun. I also really liked the one with the feet in the water, because it was good depth and it was cool how you cut off the people so you didn't see the top of them. I liked that a lot.

The other ones were really nice too, but those ones were my favorite. Good job. :)
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Hi KailiaMarie!

I'm Ellie, and I love your pictures! I have a few suggestions.
The first one is my favorite, it's clear, the sun is bright, it looks like a total summer picture which totally fits the season and mood of the picture.
The second picture is nice, but I'd suggest bumping up the saturation and make it pop a bit more.
The fourth one is also a really good one! It's like you were catching something in the act, if there were maybe a person on the platform, it'd make a better picture - but that's just my view of it.
The fifth one is a bit much, it has a little bit too much going on, I'd suggest cropping it.
Again, it's personal preference.
The feet in the water is really nice! I'd like to see a more creative angle on this one, and maybe a touch of editing.

Overall, you have great potential! I love your style, and it has a very care-free feel (in a good way!) and I'd love to see more!
Try some more different angles, and don't be afraid to ask people to do things for you in your pictures! It works wonders, and just a touch editing could go a long way!

Ellie
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Hi,

1st Picture: No complaints here. I really liked the sun and the angle.

2nd + 3rd pictures: The second picture is really clear and looks great, but the third picture has some problems with it. This one just didn't have the right angle; it may have worked had it been from a slightly lower angle. Also it isn't as clear when it comes to seeing what is below the water which is a major appointment.

4th picture: For some reason I'm seeing a white bar on the side? Other than that I like the focal point and the picture in general.

5th picture: Way to close for comfort. The tree is magnificent, but the picture was shot much too close. Cutting off the tree just makes it look messier.

6th + 7th pictures: Nothing to say really.

Looking to see more intriguing pictures soon!

~Day
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Oh.
Em.
Gee.

About the second and third of course. I just looooved them, wouldn't mind having them as a wallpaper. They looked so freaking serene and the water was so clear and... *sigh*.

I have no other comments on anything else. Soooo... yeeeaaah....
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