Yo, yo, yo YORU!

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. . . the title is clearly an attention hook.

Sooo, I've been writing since I was around ten. My writings usually take on a supernatural turn, especially having to do with affairs of celestial powers. (I seem to get the most random ideas about the nature of demons. o.o;)
My teachers always tell me my writings are too complex; I put a lot of symbolism and such into my work (whether of my own mind or rooted in reality symbols). Sooo, I suppose I could be here to find someone who can give me input on my . . . sophisticated writing issues, as my teacher put it? o.O
But I'm not going to dumb down my writing for my stinkin' English teachers, nooo sireeee . . . -rants-
Well, actually, I'm mostly here because my friend from school made me join. -is hit-

Anyway. Hey! =D
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Hey, neighbor! :o -hits back- You're here! Weeeeee!!!! Anyway, yeah. I'm going to ask some questions so I can be a bother. :twisted:

What's your favorite color? How's it goin'? Is your summer awesome yet? How're you adjusting to alpacas?

I'm going to be quiet now. Bye! See you later!


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Hey! Welcome to the site. *hands pirate* :pirate3: I'm Kaedee, or KD, or...actually, that's just about it.
Haha...ya...sometimes I can't really understand my teachers' criticism on my writing also. Sometimes their points of views just don't, well, make sense! I'd be happy to check out your writing.
I have some questions for you too! Here they are:

1. Fav. color?

2. Fav. writing genre?

3. Any awesome nicknames?

4. Dogs or cats?

Well, cya round! Get posting! Cheers-

KD

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Hello, hello!

I'm Freyja; good to meet you. Glad your friend (Eab, I'm guessing?) got you to join!

I like the supernatural. I'll be glad to check out your stuff! So, yeah, just hit me up if you want a critique at any point in time. I'm kinda slow, though...ack! Haha. Sophisticated writing issues. I dunno; if that's how you write, naturally, go with it.

So, anyway, I hope you're finding everything okay, and if not, once again don't be afraid to send me a PM.

So, erm. I guess I can help bombard you with random questions...
My stock question: What kind of music are you into?
What do you like to do besides write?

Anywho. That's all for now. Once again, welcome to YWS and hope to see you around!

Peace,
Freyja out.
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Yo, yo, yo YORU to you too. :smt001

Yeah, so hi. My name is Skins. Not in real life, that would be weird... Anyway, welcome to YWS. I'm confident that you'll fit in here. There are plenty of great people here on YWS and you're bound to make some great friends.

You like writing about supernatural stuff? So do I, so woop! In fact, I'm writing a story right now about ghosts. Plus, I'm writing a story with someone else (From YWS) about fighting demons. From what I can tell by your post, your grammar is really good. That's always a good sign, in my opinion. My grammar is pretty rubbish... I could ask you for advice on that. :lol:

As for your English teachers... they know nothing! If you ask me, complex stories are the best; they make people smarter because it makes them have to think about what you're saying. :wink: Besides, us YWSers are way smarter than them. If you even think about dumbing down your writing because of what your teachers say, remember; I know where you live. :twisted: Not really...

I'm going to shut up soon, don't worry. If you are having any trouble finding your way around YWS, just send me a private message. I will try my best to explain to you whatever you need to know. There are also some great Moderators here on YWS, so if you are having any real trouble, ask them for their help. The Moderators are the ones with the green usernames, in case you didn't know.

Okiee! I am shutting up now. :xd: Once again, welcome to The Young Writers Society!

xoxo Skins


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@ my neighbor =p

I had a dream that all my animals had to be left at my aunt's house, and the bunnies kept jumping over the fence, and the alpacas ate through the wires . . .

Does this answer your question?

@ KD

My favorite genre is . . . I suppose a sort of fantasy, almost science fiction. Just without the aliens. Supernatural like I said, I guess.
I have some nicknames . . . Faith, Aki, and different variations of Faith. XD Faye, Faifers, Faithy . . . whatever people come up with. I'm hoping, though, that the nickname "Kero" will catch on from my username. It should. It sounds cool. (But watch, it just won't.)
And I am pro-cats, most definitely. -gestures to avatar-
And my favorite color is clear. =)

@ Freyja

Music? Oh, man. Everything! DX Haha. I don't really specify to genres or bands . . . I usually just stumble upon songs I happen to like. I think the only band I've absolutely HATED has been Insane Clown Posse. They're so . . . tactless, I guess? XD But I guess my favorite bands at the moment are the Rasmus and A Rocket to the Moon. I've been hooked on the Rasmus for a while, but A Rocket to the Moon is my fascination of the week. XD

And as for other stuff, I'm really multi-interested, I guess you could say. =p I dabble with piano, even though I can't read notes, so I usually just make up my own stuff and write it my own way . . . XD I really like to draw. I've been at it for almost as long as writing. I do a lot of running, but I play tennis (track sucked -shot-). I also dabble in calligraphy. Uhm. I have a huge puzzle on the floor that isn't getting finished . . .
There's more edge pieces than there is room to make the border of the puzzle. I am still confused.

@ Skins

. . . you, my friend, I believe I am going to get along with quite well. And yes, I am a gigantic grammar nazi! =p

Do you usually write stories along with other people? I do that all the time, like seriously every day, with my sister! I used to write with lots of people, actually, but we sort of lost touch . . . oh well. It was once an obsession of mine anyway. -nostalgic sigh-

Wew. That took a lot of extending.
You march forward;
I'm just a step behind.
Stars for the wayward,
Don't forget to shine.~




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Hey there and welcome the site!

If you have any questions about the site or something feel free to send me a PM. :) It's interesting that your English teachers think your work is too complex. You'll have to let us take a look at it. ;-)

Also, you might want to consider not coloring your text when you make posts. I know it's really cool to have colorful font and stuff, but it's kinda hard for people to read it. o.o
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Yeah! Another writer who's teacher thinks their writing is too complex! Woohoo, I'm no longer alone!!

Anyways, broken record here: welcome to the site! 'bzt' Welcome to the site! 'bzt' Welcome to the site!... 'bzt'

We're a weird bunch, but you'll come to love us...heheheHAHAHAhehe. No, we're not crazy! What, I'm not crazy! No, YOU are! Yes I am! No, yes I'm not! HAAAAAHAAAA!!

...ahem. Welcome. Got any questions, feel free to shoot me a PM. Enjoy your stay!

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