The Soldier

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This is just a drawing of a soldier's uniform I did. It's a rough scetch of something in a story of mine. The medium is colored pencil over ink. Comments?
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This is just the uniform.
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This picture is of the uniform, plus two crests I doodled on the right side. I like the second one, the one with the tree. Plus, the tree kind of goes with the woodsy green of the uniform. To the left is my failed attempt at a helmet. ;)
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It looks good. I can`t wait to read the story with the soldier in it. By the way, is that a medieval soldier?
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Well, more of a DnD thing, but basically, yes.
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Looks neat!

My only suggestion would be to add more detail around the head and belt so we can see what it is, but since this is for a story, I guess that doesn't really matter. XD

The lined background is somewhat annoying as well. And what are those shield-thingies?

Ah well. I like this. Let me know if you want critiques on the actual novel!

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