Ooh La la! Jazzy likey! Lol, this hooked me in so kudos for you, as many prologues these days make me feel like burning the book as they were so bad. Just the first sentence got me hooked. The dark internal voice thing was unique and I really want to know what happens next. I can't really say much more as there isn't anything really wrong with it. Good job. PM me with the next part
~Jasmine Bells~
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
There was nothing he enjoyed more than a good book. He'd wander into the study, take down some leather-bound volume, and eat it. — Terence Brady (dog owner)
