Hidden Power

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*Plot*

You are someone special. You have always been someone special. Ever since your thirteenth birthday, you noticed you could do things no one else could. You are able to do things that amaze other people as well as yourself. However on the mainland there are people who know about you. They know what you could potentially do. You noticed that you are not the only one on the island with your gifts. You slowly have blended in with those other people. The government is after you. You have two options, stay on the island and be eliminated. Or you can inhabit the North Island, with your gifted friends. You choose option two.


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Gifted Child or Government Official

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#1- No GOD-MODDING (Just that simple)
#2- Swearing is allowed, please not vulgar
#3- No descriptive "sex" scenes
#4- Limited to two characters
#5- Keep posts over 555 characters
#6- Stay in character
#7- Have Fun
#8- No killing or beating another character up with out their consent first!
Last edited by JackpotJohnson on Sat Jun 05, 2010 6:56 pm, edited 8 times in total.
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Name: Skylar King *Likes to be called Thunder*
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: Buff African-American, with short wavy hair. Onyx colored eyes and hair. About five feet ten inches (5'10'') weighing approximately 205 pounds.
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Skills: An extremely smart teen, and a talented mechanic. Is capable of running long distances for long periods of time at a very fast pace (20Mph).
Weaknesses: When injustice has occurred, Skylar feels that he has to take the matter into his own hands, which usually results in a fight. Has a weakness when his past is brought up.
Likes: Strong-Willed people like him.
Dislikes: People who give up.
Personality: Strong-willed, but quiet. Disciplined and cautious. Like able and easy to be around. Relaxed and kind. Has no tolerance for bullies and people who intimidate other people.
History: Not much is known about Skylar other than: His dad was abusive towards him, however his mother was kind and loving.
Powers: Can enter different dimensions. Can enter, then control the souls of the people he doesn't like.
Other: When Skylar is controling another soul, a little bit of his disappears. He only uses that power when he has to. While entering a different dimension, excruciating pain occurs, and temporary blindness
Government or Gifted Teen: Gifted Teen.
Last edited by JackpotJohnson on Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:36 pm, edited 8 times in total.
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Save a spot for me, please! I can't post my profile yet, I'm too tired. I will tomorrow, though! :D
I am a fox, sly and quick.
I never give up
I never quit

I do what I can
I stand and fight

I strategize
I stand tall
throughout the night

I am a fox




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Name: Melissa - goes by "Missy"

Age(13+): 17

Gender: Female

Personality: She's bubbly and fun. She is hardly ever serious and loves to joke around. She's never really known any type of hardship and because of that, having the government hunt her has taken it's toll on her. She's changing and becoming more bitter, but she's still the kind and sweet girl she's always been.

Appearance: She's got red hair to her shoulders and pale blue eyes. Her skin in pale with a smattering of freckles across her nose and cheeks and she's considered to be pretty or cute, but not beautiful. She's average - around 5'5"- with a thin build and hardly any curves. She weighs about 125 pounds.

Image: http://www.sitemaken.nl/Josieneke/images/Image3kik.jpg

Powers(up to 2): She has the power of mind control (it is harder for her depending on how many she's trying to control) and reading other's minds. She can sometimes push her own thoughts into others minds, but that is very hard for her.

Government, or Gifted teen: Gifted teen

Other: She's up for love, I suppose. But mostly she needs a friend. :)

**Sorry, had to rush this!**
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Name: Faith

Age(13+): 16

Gender: Female

Personality: Smart, Sweet, Bubbly, Clumsy, Stubborn, Arrogant, Strategic, Athletic, Creative

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Powers(up to 2): She can control the 4 elements

Government, or Gifted teen: Gifted Teen
I am a fox, sly and quick.
I never give up
I never quit

I do what I can
I stand and fight

I strategize
I stand tall
throughout the night

I am a fox




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Name: Nikki

Age(13+): 16

Gender: Female

Personality: She is very intelligent and sophisticated. But acts ditzy and stupid. She is very caring. She can come off as a little flirty, but she's just trying to be ditzy.

Appearance: She is a brunette. Takes pride in her looks, not her intelligence. She wears gloves that go up to her elbows and boots that go up to her knees. Her close cover most her skin, but she still looks good.

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Powers(up to 2): When she touches another person's skin they feel immense pain. So does she. The pain is so terrible that she has to be pulled away, so try not to touch her skin.

Government, or Gifted teen: gifted teen

History:When she was very young she was often teased for being a nerd. So she cleaned herself up and made herself pretty and started acting dumb. Then she had the perfect life, good grades, loving parents, great friends. It was all good until she discovered her power. When she turned 13 she discovered her power. Her mother tried to hug her, then the pain started. Her father pulled her mother away after five minutes of screaming. Both her and her mother had heart attacks, and a paramedic had faced the pain to. Her mother didn't make it. When she turned 14 her father tried to stab her. So she ran away.
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Name: Raine (pronounced like Rain)

Age (13+): 16

Gender: Female

Personality: Many people would describe Raine as someone who is very calm and collected. She is very loyal to her friends, but she will not trust you if she does not know you. She is also determined intelligent, and stubborn.

Appearance: She has dark brown hair that goes to the middle of her back with caramel highlights and she has green eyes. She mainly wears bell-bottom jeans and a T-shirt. She also wears a sliver key necklace that her mom gave her.

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Powers (up to three *3*): Her powers are the ability to morph into any animal at will.

Government, or Gifted teen: Gifted Teen

History: Little is known about her: She use to have a mother, father and younger brother. In some strange incident involving a rather large animal, her mother was killed. She stole the necklace from her father and then ran.

Other: She tends to need a bit more food than a normal person does because her morphs take a lot of energy.
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Alright Guys.....WE First Off Need more GUYS.....And we need some Government officals....remember you can have up to two characters. Please Condsider what I have just said. Thanks -JJ-
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I have dibs on a Gifted Child
Gifted child
Age 13
Gender Male
Appearance Tallish, Brown Hair, Muscular, Cool clothes
Personality Laid back all in all fairly mature for his age. Likes to keep himself to himself, but some times has random outbursts of emotion. He is a thinker and can usually use his intelligence to get him out of scrapes that he is always getting into.
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Name Kyran Power
Powers He can control and manipulate energy to create power outages, surges ands lightning bolts and the ability to fly by manipulating energy in a way similar to the Biefeld–Brown effect (science Homework i thought i'd throw in to make sure i didn't waste any of the £3 it cost me :D ). He has an organic computer in his brain, makes him super smart and lets him interface with computers using his brain.He is also super strong :)
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Name: Claude Weather

Age: 16

Gender: Male

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Personality: Utter sociopath, doesn't care about anyone and uses people. He takes great pride in this and knows people don't know anything about him. Was diagnosed with Psychopathic tendencies and feels nothing for anyone.

Appearance: Long fair hair, with a long fringe obscuring his eyes. Looks quite handsome with freckles round his nose. His eyes are so dark green they're almost black.

Powers(up to three *3*): Extreme Persausion and abilty to grow knives from his knuckles.

Government, or Gifted teen: Gifted Teen

History: Was first found when thirteen after telling his parents to go die, he watched them walk out the window, gleefully. And when police finally came he had a wide grin on his face as stood over there corpse, for years he said nothing. He was taken around and around other orphanages and eventually ended up on an island. He doesn't know what these powers mean, but he solidly believes his one mission in life is to survive. And he'll do so through any means necessary, dead bodies and all.

Other: Psychopathic but no one knows it.
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Ok, since no one wanted to be a government offical, we are making it npc...We are starting the SB, and are still accepting.; TEll your friends. Maybe one of them will be G.O. for us. Thanks! -JpJ-
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NIKKI

I looked up from my hiding place, this was getting utterly retarded. Just because we had abilities that normal people didn't they wanted to kill us. Did they ever stop and think about how we feel? I haven't had physical contact with another person in three years. The last person i touched i killed, and it was my own mother! I didn't care how much pain i had felt, i had killed my own mother!

I saw another one of those government officials getting to close, he might find me! I crouched lower and closed my eyes. I heard the bush shuffle and something touched my arm, luckily for me i was wearing my gloves. I looked at him and slapped him with my other hand.
"Stupid rotten little..." He grabbed my other hand, as i pulled away my glove slipped off. He dropped my glove and grabbed my arm again. The pain came at me full fledged. I sputtered as it flowed through me. His face twisted into a horrible pain struck look.

I started screaming in pain, we were both unable to pull away. He hadn't brought anyone with him. So there was no one to save us. To pull us away. The pain would just keep increasing until we both suffered from heart attacks and died.
"Even in the end --even in death-- I can't hate you." - Neri Hereford's last words.

"The Gods demand blood, for they... do not bleed." Jaska.

The Book.




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Skylar *Thunder*

They had come again. They had come to my house, and searched everything. I managed make my house, and me normal. They left, and said they would be back. I lived alone, I moved out of my parents house ten months ago. I was eighteen now, I could take care of my self.

They knew I had powers, but they couldn't arrest me yet, because they had no proof. The ways that the government have been passing laws, pretty soon they won't need proof. They would just be able to ship us off. I was really frustrated. Any Day now, they would evacuate me and my friends: Nikki, Kyran, Raine, Faith, even Missy. I started packing my emergency room with my supplies for North Island. Spikes, my Tarantula was in his cage, and he was reckless. Did he know. No, he wasn't smart enough.

I left my house, and locked it up tight. I walked over to Nikki's house, she lived only about a block from me. She wasn't there. She lived alone also. So I went over to her favorite chill spot. She was there alright.

Running over to the area, she looked like death warmed over. I punched the G.O as hard as I could. He stumbled over and fell down. I gave Nikki her glove back, and we ran....

Later that night, I got a knock at my door. Nikki was home with me, due to the fact, that it was to dangerous to let her go to her home. I looked through the peephole. Sure enough, it was a G.O. Nikki had her stuff already ready in the emergency spare room, along with mine. She hid there. The G.O held up what looked like an Official Government Law. Sure enough, it stated: Any accused of having powers, should be transported to North Island immdieatly. So we packed our stuff and boarded the boat. Spikes came with me.
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Raine

The sun blazed on my midnight black feathers as I began to wake. Ruffling them, I looked around and decided that it was time to fully wake up and get moving. I grabbed my cloths, lifted my black wings and gave a hard stroke, weightlessly lifting myself into the air.

Circling in the sky, I looked for a safe place to land. Finding a clearing a couple of feet away I dropped my clothes in a pile and landed. Right when I landed my stomach gave an enormous growl, signaling that I was hungry and I needed food.


Closing my eyes I concentrated on the major aspects of my human form, like my hair, eyes, and body structure. Suddenly I feel the familiar, but painful burn as my bones begin to break and reform themselves, making my human form. I sat there for a minute, waiting for the burn to fade. When it did I reached over and got dressed, and started on my way to get food. Without even realizing it, I started to walk towards Thunder’s house and Nikki’s house.

After realising where I was heading, I decided to go see what Thunder was doing and if I could leech any food off of him, heck, I could go visit Nikki right after! Right as about to turn into Thunder’s yard, knock on his door and ask how he was, I noticed a G.O. member was escorting Nikki and him out of the house. Hoping that G.O. member didn't see me, I jumped into the bushes, shifted into a dark gray cat and followed them.
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Faith

I woke up, and stretched. Dust was everywhere. I really needed to clean the old place. Living in an abandoned building by myself had its ups and downs. Dust was one of its downs.

I coughed as I walked towards the front door. It was bright outside, but yet it had a sort of misty feeling.

I decided to head over to Thunder's house, even though I was still in my pajamas. I knew he wouldn't really mind, since he knew I didn't really have a lot of other things to wear.

He wasn't home, so I headed to Nikki's. She was home, and he was there too. Something looked odd about Nikki.

"Hey." I said. "What's wrong?"

"Some filthy idiot touched my hand." she said.

"Are you okay?" I asked. I knew how much it hurt her when that happened. She had accidentally touched me once, so I had felt the pain that she felt whenever it happen, and it seemed to happen a lot more than necessary.

"I am now."

I smiled. It was terrible seeing her, or any of my other friends, get hurt. That's why I hated so much to be in this situation. Just because we were different, people wanted us dead. It made no sense, but then again, that's how I felt about the entire rest of the world. Things weren't clear anymore. We never knew what was going to happen next.
I am a fox, sly and quick.
I never give up
I never quit

I do what I can
I stand and fight

I strategize
I stand tall
throughout the night

I am a fox



Defeat has its lessons as well as victory.
— Pat Buchanan