Men Much Do Many Bloody Dinner Cobwebs

Men much do many bloody dinner cobwebs

Brains still drip through
secret mother desire
and glowed above him
when mad woman stands
as a luxury coffin fell cold or flew
than never kiss past beauty
plus worst bones don’t
hand me romance
having will part

this wasn't deleteable...

It reminds me of the Munsters, but yeah, it doesn't really make sense. I still sort of like it because it's a quick nonsensical poem, but I still have to ask...

Is there a reason why you wrote this?

This for some reason reminded me of something Sylvia Plath would have written. It is very Lawrentian to me. I like it, maybe that's just me in my morbidity. I like the title, and the part about the mad woman and coffins. The last line has me questioning though, I'm not sure its sensical enough as a last line. I'd work with that.

Fauste

I don't think something necessarily has to make sense to be enjoyed. FotN, I think you're being a tad harsh...it is not bad as such, it's just that it doesn't connect in a way that you probably like.
Personally, I like the way you write anyway - you always have great imagery and I you use beautiful combinations of words. However, if you do want people to be able to understand it ( and lets face it, having to work things out and actually use your brain is so much more fun ) then there needs to be more connection throughout the poem.
I always forget that people can't be in my head when they're reading the poem - it seems that you tend to do what I do, and follow your train of thought.
But all in all, I liked it

I'm in on a secret.... yoha will reveal all soon enough.... I LOVE IT, but i cannot tell why currently. Sorry!

I like this, in its brevity you've managed to pack in some very powerful imagery. I especially like the title and the first two lines. Very nice!

deadrose

Ok, time for the big reveal. A FotN said... there is a secret behind this. It's a big joke. This was "written" be mostly me with the help of some of my friends including FotN. It was created after school in my friend's locker using her locker magnets. All we were trying to do was make really funny sentences while using up all of the words. And for more laughs we got the idea of posting it on here. So tada. I feel bad having to say this but I'm flattered that you think it's good. It's been entertaining. Thank you!

The scary part is that it makes sense to me...............and I like it............................................

This was morbily lovely....
It was short and simple... and oh so confusing!
But I liked it...
Now I'm confufsed as to what it means...
It's scary! Ahh! I love it so much though!