Unstrung

Yeah, I'm not so good at teh art thing, but I love doing it, so. =O This is a doodle I did in my sketchpad using my new pencils. =D



I don't have a scanner, so unfortunately it looks grainy because of my webcam. But. You get the idea.

Hi Nutty
You're better at the art thing than I'll ever be.
I like this picture, it reminds me a dance some of my friends did.
Its a good drawing even though its a bit grainy.
midnightread

Hey Nutty. (Whao...how many users here are called 'Nutty'? ) This is Kaedee, here to review!

Things You Did Well On:

-You did a superb job with the position; definitely much better than I could do! Very realistic.
-Continuing on with the position...I especially love the guy's hand on the left. It looks like a claw.
-The boxy look to the guy's body parts is starting to grow on me, I have to say.
-I like how he's faceless.

Cons:

-His hair. I don't really like the not-on-purpose-messily-drawn look to his shaggyish hair.
-Make some stronger lines! It'll make your work so much...well, stronger. Stronger lines also make your work look cleaner, unless your using shaky lines on purpose, for example, the strings. Leave the strings alone; I'm not talking about them!
-The weird string that is in a loop on the left side of the picture confuses me, and my eye is drawn to it, rather than the guy.
-This isn't exactly a con, but rather, some advice! Hehe. Okay; I think having more darker shades of black is more appropriate for this picture, especially since it 1. adds contrast, 2. makes certain parts of the drawing stand out, 3. make the drawing more 3D.

Overall:

Nice job. Keep up the good work, hope I helped!

~KD

Thanks, guys =D I wanted to ink it, but I lost my pen. >.> but yeah, thanks for the help. The hair annoyed me, I think you noticed. =P

As to how many Nuttys there are, only me and whiteshadow that I know of that are active, and I've been here three years now, so I think I would have noticed any more =P
(though I was originally nuttychooky)

Hey there, Cheyanne! =D

I know this'll echo the other people, but this is way better than anything I could do, haha. And lies! You are great at art, from all that I've seen from you.

Anyways though, this is pretty good except for, like you said, the hair. Maybe change the shading in that area a little bit? *shrug*

Good luck and good job though.

~Heather

I really like your drawing. I agree that his hair is a little sloppy and the loopy line off to the side is a little distracting, but I love the overall effect. I don't know if it's what you intended but it feels so morbid to me, but in a very cool way. If that makes any sense. Lol.